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I do love how we're thrown in media res with this story. It's something not a lot of authors do, nor do well.
Dang, this is some interesting stuff. I actually like the dynamic of Rosewater and Collar. They sound like ponies who've been playing this game for a while.
Also question on if I have the current Roses family relationship correct: Rosewater is a main branch family member (the heir, if I'm reading right), Rosemary is her cousin (so a side branch; the Rosethorns?), and Cloudy is a farther off branch member?
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You are correct on the relationships. Rosewater is the firstborn and heir apparent of Merrie, and Cloudy Rosewing is a mare from a smaller branch, and more of that will come out in future chapters. Rosemary is Rosewater's first cousin - her aunt's daughter.
And thank you! In Medias Res is... hard for me. I like to know what happened before, but I did it because it made more sense. This chapter and the one before it saw a lot of revisions as I figured out the past through future chapters, but the past is now pretty solid in my head and in future chapters.