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....so bit only is she Crazy Mom Horse, she's Dumb Crazy Mom Horse. Are you nuts?!
Not unless you're Pinkie, I guess.
Also poor Dazzle. He seems like such a good stallion, but it's probably for the best he doesn't end up tangled in this war any more than he is or may be.
I can't wait to see how many brains are melted by Cloudy going with Rosewater next time. It's gonna be some good schadenfreude.
Also an AU?!?! 👀
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Yes.
The AU was planned about the time I got to the middle of this part. Or, rather, Cara started poking at it because he is perpetually AUing things, and I got dragged along, got invested in the idea, and actually wrote 20~ chapters that will now need to be revised because we decided some of the things were too convoluted to make sense and opened up too many plot holes.
Dazzle plays a more major part, inspired in part because of the way he grows close to Rosewater and serves as a bit of a foil to Roseate's attentions. In the AU, he's her bodyguard, personally assigned to her by Collar because the three of them are childhood friends, and the law allows for foreign troops on Merrie land if they're protecting a dignitary visiting the land. Well, Rosewater isn't just a dignitary visiting, but the heir apparent to two cities as co-ruler with Collar. Most of the drama and story beat resolves around their six year old son, Promise, and Roseate's attempt to foalnap him. Not openly, but through proxies like the bandit clans (a greater threat in the AU) that don't want to see a united, Equestrian-aligned Merriedamme because it will mean they will have a harder time making it.
But, as said, it needs a lot of rewriting (if I'll be writing it at all). I actually have a modern component to this story that takes place five hundred years after this one concludes with... well. Spoilers. I do want to write that one, and I have 16~ chapters written for it. It's a much darker story than this, and far more of an adventure and not confined to one city, but roves all over Equestria trying to understand the story-specific McGuffin and how to make it work... or how to prevent it from being used for evil. It's also an AU of the show, since neither Merrie nor Damme exist in the show, and some special AU glitz that I'm taking and extrapolating from the planned ending of this story.
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Shut up, I can quit anytime I want.
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*fidget*