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She was even more fun as a filly, just coming into her talent. A sister that can disappear and reappear at will? Good grief, can you imagine playing hide and seek with her? Winner. Every time. And laughing all the while. Except when she wants to lose. Or when those with better noses get the sneak on her. I keep imagining her and Rosewater winning and losing an escalating war of hide and seek, and each winning by more and more interesting ways until somepony with a little common sense steps in and puts a rest to it and says 'No invisibility. No super nose.'
Why must political intrigue be so cute?
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Because political romantic intrigue! It simply must! Also, Collar gets some of his silliness from Dapper, but he needs to relax to let it out, and Rosewater just needs to relax period. (extra period for emphasis) => .
I finally caught up! Been enjoying this story.
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I'm glad you are! It's been a joy to write, too.
screams from the distance KISS YOU FREAKING DORKS
cries in the distance WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEE
very literally cries in the distance
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Roseluck: "You have no idea how many times I've had to tell people my flowers won't grant them any more luck than they're already due."
Classics. Always go for the classics.
Mmmhmm.
You won't have to wait long for him to realize it. Sometimes I worry that actions and reactions happen too quickly in sequence in the story, but other times that they're spaced too far apart. I try to get kinda... halfway between too quick and too long. Sometimes, I think I even get there. This was a very slow burn romance. A book and three quarters to get there. But I do try to live by "It's not the surprise that's important, but its execution." IE: it doesn't matter if you know it's coming.
I just want to make sure even if you know it is, it's enjoyable the whole way through.
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I'm so sorry! *cries* I promise, his realization is coming. And he's going to make it up to her for making her wait. buuut... not for a little while yet. Sorreee!