Hehehe yes! It begins :D

Oooh, I'm excited!

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Me too! I'm working through my backlog of chapters, getting them their final shine. For a while, it's going to be daily updates, then slower as I get into less refined territory, and possibly slower as I get into crossover territory (with my writing partner, Cara, not crossover as in crossover-crossover).
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So it does!

10273432 oh thank god, you nearly spoiled the Infinity War arc...

Hmm, I'm intrigued by this. Quite well-written.

That sentence is a little weird. Did you mean flora instead of 'flaura'? It looks like you mixed the words flora and fauna together. And did you mean "made entirely without flora" or "made entirely out of flora?"

Made entirely out of flora, yes. Thank you for catching that.

I had trouble with this bit as well. I assume she is referring to Prince Collar, whom she know has been spying on her, but beyond that, (and I may just be dumb), but I admit I'm not 100% sure what you're trying to say here. (edit: unless some other part of him near his tail is what she is referring to?)

I changed the wording a bit to fix that. And he's not actually a prince, but a Lord. His full proper name is Prim Collar. Usually just shortened to Collar, or lengthened to the the full familial name of Primline Collar.

And yes... lots of names and places.