im a dutch programmer who reads and will one day write mlp fan fiction.
later chapters will have some sexual reference...you have been warned...
Rainbow dash discovers the meaning of life is to love...but she simply cant find some-pony to love.
characters will be added when they appear.
picture and name subject to change
constructive criticism welcomed
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1085079
Thanks m8 i knew you'd like it
have a mustache for being the first post
Why thank you
Very interesting fic. i'm not normally a fan of romance stories, however i do have to give credit for how people tell them.
1085631
thanks
1085660 No problem.
This could turn interesting, but the grammar needs a bit of work. Also, I am unsure if they're trying to be as "thorough" as possible, or if they are trying to be like Henry David Thoreau, It could go either way.
thanks for feedback...and i know about my grammer (i reley on spell check alot)
1085955 Don't rely on it too much. Google and spell check have failed me at times. I'd be happy to read over your future chapters and point out the mistakes so you can fix them before you post the story.
You had a good idea for the story... But you really need to make it better... Add more description, a little more emotion and really REALLY improve your grammar... You could get more views and followers if you worked harder... I don't know how others feel, but I felt that your writing was, well, sloppy... Don't let me get you down though... You have a great thing building up here... You just need to improve it... Make more literary. Pleasent to read... Or else it's going to be like a story you tell a friend... No an actual piece of literature... I hope my review (sort of) helps.
Errm... Wii Fit?
This are humorous.
1086328
thanks
>> every-pony else
thanks for telling the truth
Also, no offense (trying to help) but giant golden ball!!??
DEAR MR.VANDIE,
Y U SO BADASS?!!!!!!!
LOVED IT AND MAKE MOAR OR CELESTIA WILL BANISH YOU TO THE EVERFREE FOREST!!!!!!
1086624
well im working on chapter 2 now...
but im gonna take more than 2 days to finnish it so i can be sure it is awsome
Hmm. Should you keep the pacing and the grammar mistakes going the same at the same rate, I would recommend you also tag this as a comedy possibly.
I've read comedies with this kind of pacing before and I think it actually made the story better because of the tag.
Labels are a funny thing.
I'll keep an eye on this story though, I'm rather interested in the adventure aspect.