overpowered troll

by jen_lee_hattie

Prologue: How I get me powers

Nearly all women can stand adversity, but if you want to test a women's character, Give her power.

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P.O.V Jenny lee

I was walking home at night from my boring job as an accountant. when I felt like I had to look up at the starry sky and that is when I saw a shooting star and with any shooting star I wish on it.

"I wish to be an overpowered troll with broken/overpowered powers from anime, tv shows, and games I have played or seen before." I wish on that star, but little did I know that a goddess was listening to what I was wishing for.

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P.O.V Yami

I was watching this world when I heard someone wish to be an overpowered troll with powers from anime, tv show, and games they played/seen before, That sounds like fun wish to grant and it would help with the boredom that I have felt for a bit, so I thought why the hell does not bring them up here to talk and grant their wish.

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P.O.V Jenny lee

when I get to my home I went right to my bad and went to sleep.

Sometime later
P.O.V Jenny lee

I woke up to endless darkness all around me and I can't see a think

"Where am I? and how the fuck did I get here?" I asked my self aloud

"You are in my domain and I bright you here to grant you the wish you wish for " said a weird dark voice

"Who the fuck are you want what do you mean by that?" I asked the weird dark voice

"I am Yami the dark goddess and what I mean but that is that I will give you the powers you want and all I went in change is that you entertained me with what you do with the powers I give to you." the now name Yami

"Why should I trust the goddess of darkness like you?" I asked her

"Because you can play this game of mine or go to hell because you died in your sleep." said Yami without a care in the world

"Ok I play but I want to have Ki and charka right off the bat and a fiction adaptation ability with gamer powers." I said

"Yes but you have to troll some every month to have the fiction adaptation ability or you will lose it into you troll someone and only can use it once a week, is that all?" said then ask Yami

"That is fair, so what is this game of you all about?"I said then asked

"The game is simple all you have to do is live thought my little pony friendship is magic from beginning to end and troll the living shit out of the world, and to make it more fun I am letting you get powers from amines, tv shows, and games with what you already asked and have a passive power that will allow you to gain powers from those around you over time." said Yami

"Ok that sounds like it will be fun and I am guessing I am going to start five years before day 0 of the show." I said

"Yes you are right about starting five years, but you should start creating your character for the game if you want you can keep your name or choose a new one," said Yami

After Yami said that a pinkish white box with text on it pops up in front of me. I look to Yami and see they are gone and that I am alone with the pinkish-white box.

Begin Character Customization?
Y/N

I press yes because I want to get this done and over with

Beginning Customization

Please wait…

Loading Profile…

Calculating Stat Values...

Loading Explanations…

Presenting Profile Page…

Name:???

Level:1

Exp:(0/100)

Race: Not Selected

Power Level: 5(average power level of mortal without access to an energy source, like Ki.)

Health:80

Ki: unlocked

Cha(Chakra): unlocked

Rie(Rietsu):locked

Ki Regen: unlocked

Chr(Chakra) Regen: unlocked

Rie(Rietsu) Regen:locked

All stat values start at 10 other than Int and Wis, as they were loaded from a previous life.

Str(Strength):8

Affects a character's overall power.

Agi(Agility):12

Effects overall flexibility and Dodge rate

Sp(Speed):13

Effects overall Speed of character

1 point = mph sprinting speed.

Mind:15

It affects the memory of the character, how much they can recall, how fast they can perceive the world around them.

Int(Intelligence):23

It affects the character's ability to think rationally and make strategies.

Wis(Wisdom):18

It affects the character's ability to think beyond related knowledge, to “think outside the box” as it were. High wisdom can create a Sixth
(or in the case of energy users Seventh) Sense.

Chr(Charisma):5

The character's ability to understand others on an emotional level, and to be more knowledgeable on social cues and interactions.

Status Points:10

These are spendable points you gain from each level up, you also start with ten points.

Debuffs are loaded from a previous life.

Buffs

You must earn your Buffs, too bad you still have Debuffs.

Debuffs

Introvert:

You are severely introverted, this causes Socially Inept Debuff if left alone too long.

-2 Chr

Socially Inept:

You remained an introvert for several years, causing a severe lack of social interaction.

-3 Chr

Neutral Buffs

These are buffs that both positively and negatively impact your character.

Speed over Strength:

You have a naturally speed based build but you also have never (willingly) worked out in your life other than when forced to.

-5 Str but due to frequent forced exercise, the penalty was lowered to -2 Str but also +3 speed and +2 Agi.

Please select your name and race

Name:

State, think, or type your name in.

"Jenny lee" I said

Please choose a race or a mix of races. You can only mix up to four races.
Race:
Human

Saiyan

Namekian

Arcosian

Majin

Demon

Hollow

Visord

Biju

Vasto Lorde

The Italicized races are the only races that you can't mix with other races.

"Wow that is not a lot to mix but I work with this" I said

I thought about it for a while before picking humans, Saiyan, namekian, and arcosian. It then gave me four labeled sliding bars with percentages on them, at certain percentages it gave different buffs for belonging to that race. I immediately moved namekian up to 10% giving me a Regen Buff for regrowing limbs and orogens at the slowest rate, along with moving arcosian to 25% giving me immediate access to Ki and a significant boost to my physical stats by around 150, and a good boost to my power level as a result. Then I evened it out between Saiyan and human as best I could, 60% Saiyan 58% human, that gave me full access to Saiyan instincts, transformations, and having a tail. The human side gave me minor survival instincts, emotionally affected powers, a luck boost be 4 and from both humans and Saiyan being the dominant races, I kept my human appearance. The emotional affected powers buff basically made my emotions affect my power, giving me a power boost whenever I am pissed off. Along with that, the Saiyan side also gave me a physical stat boost of 50 and the human side gave me a boost of 20 to mental stats

Race selected: Mix (Saiyan, Human, Arcosian, Namekian)

Loading a new Profile Sheet…

Calculating Stats…

Presenting Profile…

Jenny lee

Level:1

Exp:(0/100)

Race: Mix

(Saiyan, Human, Arcosian, Namekian)

Power Level: 666

Health: 99

Ki: 200

Cha: unlocked

Rie: locked

Ki Regen: unlocked

Chr Regen: unlocked

Rie Regen: locked

Str: 38

Agi: 39

Sp: 44

Mind: 30

Int: 40

Wis: 29

Chr(Charisma): 8

Status Points:10

Buffs

Namekian Regeneration:

You can now regrow all body parts other than the head/brain and heart

Regrow limbs within 1:30 hours

Regrow organs within 3:30 hours

Can cut Regen time in half by focusing on regrowing the limb and/or organ.

Arcosian's Innate Power:

Due to you being, even slightly, related to the Arcosian race, you get their Innate ability to use ki and their Innate power

+16 to all physical stats

Ki usage gained

Saiyan Warrior Race:

Due to being at least 60% Saiyan and it being your dominant race you gain all Saiyan traits and access to obtain the ask transformations.

+10 to physical stats

Human's Strength of Will:

Due being at least 50% Human, you gain human's minor survival instincts, emotionally affected power level, and rational thought processes

+20 to mental stats

Debuffs

Introvert:

You are severely introverted, this causes Socially Inept Debuff if left alone too long.

-2 Chr

Socially Inept:

You remained an introvert for several years, causing a severe lack of social interaction.

-3 Chr

Neutral Buffs

Speed over Strength:

You have a naturally speed based build but you also have never (willingly) worked out in your life other than when forced to.

-5 Str but due to frequent forced exercise, the penalty was lowered to -2 Str but also +3 speed and +2 Agi.

please choose the type of world you would like.
Pony
Anthro

'well this is a bit Yami left out I get to chose if the mlp fim world I get to go to is either human-like ponies or just ponies what to do what to do' I think to myself

after a few minutes of thought, I pass the anthro one

Anthro Selected

Loading Data...

Placing a character in a forest...

Knocking out character for transport...

' wait wha-' I was starting to think when I was knock out

P.O.V Jenny lee

Sometime later

I woke up in the everfree in a clearing near a small river.

Author's Note:

Hello how do you like the first chapter of this story? I hope you all like it and please tell me if I made a spelling mistake or grimmer mistake so that I can fix it. please R&R and see you in the next chapter when I get around to making it.

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edit: 8/12/2020; I made Yami more easily read for those of you who read in night mode and I am going to do so for all the other chapters as well.

Comments

[Knight of Crows]

Spelling and grammar errors everywhere in the description, afraid to read story because of it.

[-Pinkamena_Pie-]

X_X The grammar, the spelling! Oh lord...

[Shattered_Moon]

I'll read it, but the word coloring is not night-mode friendly.

[Isseus]

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[DisplacedWriter]

...You might wanna read a few of the displaced stories that have made overpowered characters work.

[MetallicPie]

...

I'm sorry, but what did I just witness?

Grammar needs some work.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9780136
I have and I did my best with what I wanted to do.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9780157
what parts do I need to work on. it well help me fix what is wrong.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9779383
then take it off and read it in the light. (I am not try to sound rude I am just saying this.)

[cunning_linguist]

I think this is a parody. If not, say it is a parody. Because if this is your honest-to-goodness best attempt at writing... holy shit, son.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9784456
kind of, I take a bit of someone else story but add my own twist there is little of it. and I know I am a bad writer that is why I make stories for others to read so that they could tell me what to work on and fix.

[MonkeyManiac]

this story looks fun!

[jen_lee_hattie]

9786668
Thanks, I try my best to make stories everyone can read and enjoy.

[MonkeyManiac]

9786749
you're welcome

[thedarkalicorn]

9780432
Yes but for somepeople light mode is to bright.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9805122
maybe put it on High contrast-dark(or some other color that works), I am just trying to help and so if that does not work then I will try to from that works.

[thedarkalicorn]

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

[jen_lee_hattie]

9892154
still working on chapter 2 just live and me being a bit lazy so maybe a week or two.

[vortex123]

Interesting, baring the bad grammar (which is understandable as you’re still new to writing), the story is pretty interesting. Though I’m not sure why she would’ve gone to hell, what could she have done that would cause that after death. If I was in her shoes, I would have gone with the Biju (she’d have way more chakra and could have used the transformation jutsu so she could walk around like any human. And not to mention that out of all her abilities, chakra would be the most effective at trolling people, Naruto can attest to that). Though I guess her choices would be the most effective for an OP character, not at the start though.

[jen_lee_hattie]

9999044

9988108

I am planning on adding a biju later on in the story these powers are just the start of them.

[LEGION55]

.....I'd have added Majin.

[jen_lee_hattie]

10098165
maybe later but I don't want to have them to be to overpowered.

[Daedrik]

Proof read please proof read

[jen_lee_hattie]

10228975
One I know and two please don't swear in the comments I like to run a pg-13 comments only. (Next time I see you swearing down here I WILL delete it.)

[lainverse]

Well, that's a trainwreck. Hard to tell from the first chapter exact kind of wreck, so I'll keep reading.

Two technical issues so far:

• In night mode which this site provides (bright text, dark background) it's absolutely impossible to read Yami's messages without selecting then and that's mighty inconvenient.
• What kind of broken math you used to calculate percentage of character's races mix? 60 + 58 is already 118% and there are 35% between other two races which brings us to 153% total. But that's a problem since percent based calculations can only get past 100 when we comparing something with something else. Like this line is by 150% longer than the other one (which means it's 2.5x longer considering initial line is 100%, so adding 150 on top brings us to 250% total). However, since Jen is a single whole entity she can't go over 100% of herself. After all there isn't half her body lying nearby to count that for the remaining 53% which didn't fit into the main body.

[jen_lee_hattie]

10318757
To be fair with the second point I just used random numbers and don't do any math at all.

[Horseus lord of horses]

10229647
You know the irony of this is that you used the F-word on your description.