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DrySpell


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nice reference to WWE's the Club

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AAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Somebody actually got it
I'm doing this more often now

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Call off the search, I found the Good Brother

Wow. I loved this a lot, the characters were so lively, and fascinatingly in depth! Stormy is quite the mare, and I'm impressed that you were able to make such a one dimensional Mona into a confident, sexually free character. The allusions to deeper story, such as the drama with her parents, and her relationship with her sister is just so cool and seamlessly integrated. Stormy is again a really cool OC and I enjoyed her role as the learner while Mona led. Monas teasing and clever dialogue was cool too, though I must admit that your take on her is pretty different to what I imagined her as being, which is still super cool.
I really enjoyed this story and appreciate the fact that you would put so much work into something for me! Thank you so much for bringing one of my OC's to life like this, I owe you one!

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Thanks! I'm an expert at being a disappointment!
But really, thanks for reading and the idea. I'll try to write more from now on

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Who said anything about dissappointment lol? It was awesome!

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I am a fan of both WWE's Club and NJPW's Bullet Club
You'll find a ponified version of the logo on derp ibooru (combine parts). just look up 'bullet club'

Why did you get your avatar?

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Artist is OneTrueJohnDoe. I would link to it, but there's a nude version as well. Just look up that name + Raven

Dang, took me five days to finish this story. Glad I did.

Thumbs up for you, fellow user!

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Thanks for the like!

Nice story. Sex is somewhat technical and by-the-numbers, but interactions between characters made up for it.

It ends somewhat abruptly. I would love to read more about these ponies.

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