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Well, to say the truth, that was a good start as your first clop Fic. I seen worse
Maybe you can bring more details in or write the chapters a bit longer, especially the 4. Chapter could have been longer.
But the idea wasn´t bad to begin with and has potential to become much more.
Maybe you can make a sequel about that