Scootaloo and the CMC are planning to put themselves out there when Scootaloo embarrasses herself in front of her idol, Rainbow Dash. When Scootaloo deals with panic attacks, Rainbow does everything in her power to help her out; they become much closer with time.
To the author - i love it! rarely don't see this type of story being done or subject matter (especially in the equestria girls universe) is it going to be a mulit-chapter or short story? please write more.
Very nice and gives attention to scoots
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Yes, it's a multi-chapter! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for commenting! It truly means a lot!! I will let you know! Hopefully my next chapter will be good 🤞🏾🤞🏾
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Thank you so much! Hopefully I can focus on both characters! Ty for commenting, it means a lot!
Good chapter
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Thank you!
This story really focuses on human scootaloo and Rainbow dashes relationship
And that's pretty rare
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Thank you. But I think that there is a story that I love called Promises by RaylanKrios that indicates their relationship exclusively as well.
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What would you do to protect someone you cared about?To the author - sorry i'm replying 3 days later (got sidetracked...i'll explain!) really good chapter! could you make the next chapter a bit longer?
ya don't have to if you can't/feel unable to write one like that or length:)
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I'll try, but I might need some help. I wrote these two chapters off-the-cuff, so that explains why they're not as long.
Btw I like long chapters, too, so you don't have to worry 😊
This was sooo sweet! The end when Dash was comforting Scoots had me smiling the whole way through 😊 Like you, I’ve always adored their sisterly relationship. I love any story with them two, so as I expected, I love this story so far! I’m going onto the next chapter now! I bet it will be just as great :)
Also, is this story still going? I know it’s not finished, I mean are you planning on continuing it? Cause I loooove this story so far! These types of stories are rare, so finding this one was a goldmine. I’m really hoping you’ll continue it, cause it’s awesome so far ^^
ah rainbow dash lookin out for scoots
beautiful