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Life_in_a_monologue


"What you carry in this life should be bigger than you" - Cameron Boyce

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This story is a sequel to The Equus Club


As a continuation of the story The Equus Club by SharpSpark, the Main 5 try to stick together during a period of life where it would be very difficult to do so due to status and identity.

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Comments ( 8 )

Will Fluttershy confess to Sunset in this fic?

9742889
There's a chance 😉 but it will be one of the later chapters, not that late tho

9743102
Btw, is Celestia principal of CHS, and is Luna vice-principal?

Not a bad beginning, it is nice to see a story focusing on just these five. Though I have to say, there was a lot of typos and other errors, plus a lack of description or clarity that resulted in some spots being overly vague and/or confusing (e.g. It was unclear who hit who at first.) So, there are some spots that’d deserve a little bit of polish.

9794995
How bout you private message me and we can talk. Highlight the the typos so I can fix them

9797078
Fair enough, give me a minute.

Aww incomplete?

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