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Orzo Pasta


I have returned (he/they)

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This story is now an outdated version. An updated version will be linked here when it is available. This version is being left up for now, but will not receive any updates and is cancelled.

Midnight Shadow, an earth pony living in Ponyville, discovers that he has a special talent for mechanical engineering. However, his inventions end up dragging him into a conflict between forces of light and darkness, with consequences far beyond what he had hoped for. With the fate of Equestria in the balance, and no way to return to his quiet life from before, he has only one option: keep going, and hope that a solution presents itself.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

I really enjoyed the original story, and this rewrite looks really good so far, great job with it!

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed what I've written so far.

I'm leaning on the original being better so far, though this is only the first chapter...I will reserve my decision once I get further into it...

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