The Royal Executioner

(The reason I marked it for gore is it had a bit of soft gore. Not too much though...yet). This story follows the present and past of the Royal Executioner Twisted Fate, a dark green colt who just returned from a 300 year banishment. All the way into the current war with the changling army.

Chapters (5)

Chapter 1 · 11th Aug 2012 · 2,339 words
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Chapter 2 · 11th Aug 2012 · 2,216 words
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Chapter 3 part 1 · 12th Aug 2012 · 1,746 words
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Chapter 3 part 2 · 16th Aug 2012 · 2,100 words
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Chapter 4 · 28th Aug 2012 · 2,898 words
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Koregazz

Koregazz #1 · Aug 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

look at all that there thar grammar!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

see...I told you I would comment on dis'n. Hmm...I should prolly read this now eh? Ya I prolly should

jordanwriter

jordanwriter #2 · Aug 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Well, this was surprisingly good. Up voted and tracked.

Wing Dancer

Wing Dancer #3 · Aug 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I'm curious to see where this Gary Stu is going.

Will have to be one hell of a story to make it at least plausible....

Wing Dancer

Wing Dancer #4 · Aug 13th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 part 1 ·

The premise seems interesting.

Do go on. I'm curious to see how will he live up to those 300 or so years. And how the buck he got so amazing during that time.

E-Shadows

E-Shadows #5 · Aug 14th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Damn dude... that story was actually very well put together. Good job.

Goatguy64

Goatguy64 #6 · Aug 14th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 part 1 ·

Thanks! I'm currently finishing up chapter 3. I'm glad I posted part one of it, it kind of felt to me like I had the first 2 chapters leading up to it...

jordanwriter