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Aaaaw, lewd and sweet. Cant wait for the family to visit.
Thanks for the update!
So cute
Yes! Wonderful chapter.
There was so much world building in this chapter. The "moon" levels akin to defcom. The other nations. Luna continuing to be awesome. Cadence being the absolute opposite of being a prude. I love all that.
My critique: Please make sure to spell out numbers.
Example: (The 5 of them ate lunch.
Then, five more ate lunch. )
It reads and flows better when numbers are spelled out.
"How much are these two pies?"
"Twenty bits for both!"
"That's a great deal! I want to get two pies too."
Then there was the "after-party." Nice. I really enjoyed the teat play. I'm glad that Cinnamon gets to have some wish fulfillment there.
I can't wait to see what other privileges, rights, and responsibilities being a consort will bring.
Thanks for a great chapter. And thank you for posting.
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I'll take that into account.
Says the mare who's been doing it months before HER announcement.
Would be just Cinnamon's luck if the cheese on his potato was laced with said potion... allowing the potion to become active just as they consummate his "change of position".
That could lead into a VERY interesting future.
Finally, an author that gives mare titties some attention. Most authors forget they even exist or just throw a quick sentence in and then move on.
This is the first human x feral mare story I have read, including non mlp stories that has the guy straight up motorboating some mare titties.
With Celestia saying she liked the teat play maybe she could repay cinnamon for doing something and give him a titty fuck while sitting on his lap or laying on her back.
As for the rest of the chapter I found it funny, cute, and overall enjoyable. It was funny how Luna got rid of the reporters, a princess yelling at the top of her lungs about the process of procreation in front of all her subjects, absolutely hilarious.
I'm really enjoying everything about this story, keep up the good work.
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Glad and a bit surprised that I could give you that first experience ^_^
Although, thinking back, I can’t recall reading one either.
That's not a great analogy. If I'm to fight an army by myself in ten minutes, then sure, one at a time is probably preferable to an en masse attack. If it's to happen in ten years though I might just decide to face them all at once, and in the meantime step up the timetable on my personal nuclear device project. In either case the more information that is available beforehand the better the chances are of a personally favorable outcome.
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Yea, he wasn’t 100% confident in his answer either.
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Still a decent bit of characterization, though. I mean she's so old it must be hard for her not to treat everyone around her like children, even when she claims to desire that.
I appreciate Luna bullshitting the reporters.
Also a nice sex scene.
Dude, considering the context, it's not exactly rocket science. Then again, maybe I'm just genre savvy with a dirty mind.
Oh snap!
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That's why I said "if you want to." I just wanted to make sure you had a background on those thees and thous you've been using.
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Yea, it’s good information to have. Up to this point I’ve been using the one that just sounds good in context of what I’m trying to say.
I'm glad the announcement has finally been made. I hope Cinnamon sends word to his parents before or as they hear the news. Oh! A "Meet the Parents" senario sounds good. Luna trolling the reporters was hilarious. The lewd was very good. Great world building and characterizations too. Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading the next one.
Luna being an obstinant little shit is always hilarious.
even growing up in ponyland, human's gonna be a titty man on instinct alone.
Thus far has been a sweet story with a lead one can relate to, for the most part.
I only have a couple questions that were probally asked in previous chapters, but im gonna ask anyway.
Firstly, why didnt twilight reconize cinnamon as a human? Was EG cannon in this fic?
Secondly, since the paired sisters law sounds like a the happenstance of one of cinnamon's dream, will celestia learn that luna basically had dream sex with cinnamon?
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad to see so many people enjoying this.
To answer the first question; I didn’t originally plan for EG to be cannon but I also didn’t originally plan for this story to be... well, a story. I do remember one other person asking about this a long time ago so I do have possible points where the EG world might be mentioned to Cinnamon but if it doesn’t feel right then I’m not going to force it in. But your comment does bring up a good question as to why Cinnamon wouldn’t know about this world and I do have a good reason written down if it does come up.
And for the second; keep reading for the first part, but the second part will be yes.
Cute chapter and the mistery has been reveal at long last.
Question, so far Cinnamon has meet Minotaurs, but has he ever meet a Holstaur, or female Diamond Dogs and/or Abissians?
Because if he like tits that are particularly big. Just one glance to any of those examples might answer his unknow craving, specially of Holstaur (female minotaurs)
Not that it matter now that he is with the princess, but still now I'm curious if he ever meet one of those creatures before.
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Correct
A Holstar is planned but it’s currently at a milestone that may take a long time to get to. I’m still debating wether it’ll be in this or split into a sequel story and keep this one more focused on a few races before it gets crazy.
As for diamond dogs and the cat folk; I see them as the same as how ponies work; relatively flat chested until they go through a pregnancy. I don’t really read or watch Mlp so I haven’t seen a female diamond dog or cat folk, just a curvaceous parrot.
Holstar may be the only race that is a similar breast size or larger than Celestia given her special circumstance.