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Oh Luna. Always being the sister you should be.
lovely chapter and a little bundle of surprise xD
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it
I love Cinnamon's parents and it's good to see they're trying to raise good folk. That was an interesting dream/nightmare Cinnamon was having. Nice bit of foreboding. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
A couple of things that pop up for me:
When did Cinnamon's mom become an Alicorn?
Cinnamon has grandpoines?
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eheh, no I was planning for Coco to be the one he met in the store but I decided to change it to Vanilla for... reasons I'm unable to recall. Fixed. (edit: I think I changed it to go for more of the overprotective father not fully approving of a guy his daughter wants to date).
He does. I don't watch the show so do tell me if this would break some sort of cannon, but I just assume ponies live for as long as we do.
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I figured it was a last minute change. I like the overprotective father bit. I can just picture Coco giving Celly the "What are your intentions with my son?" speech.
Canon implies ponies live as long as we do. I think they live a little bit longer though. With the size of the house I was thinking Coco and Vanillia had a lot of children or had a herd which they were the leads for. While I do like the concept of herding, I lean towards the former. Fits better in-story. Cinnamon came into their lives as the last of their children grew up and moved out. Maybe there's even a protective older sister who still comes around.
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They bought the house from the success of the bakery. Coco and Vanilla are also currently in a monogamous relationship.
Harems in this story are going to be common but harems of more than three creatures are going to be as rare as relationships of two.
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Harem has a different connotation for me within the realm of RGRE. Its members don't have an interest in each other beyond a sexual one and some not even that. Herds on the other hand are committed polyamorous relationships whose members love, care for and support each other in all ways.
That said, Coco and Vanilla being mono is good. Like I said, I think that fits the narrative better. Plus, it means they were very busy little ponies having lots of sex for the purposes of procreation.
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Yes, herd was what I meant to say. I’m not sure why I said harem.
90% certain the bat mare is scouting our boy for suitor suitability.
Dad skills: well over 9000.