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Luna you snake you! Don't you be calling for our human in his dreams! Our kinds can't remember them so your love will be one sided!
You know, even if it only a monthly update rate, you may want to remove the "On Hiatus" tag.
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Yea. When I first put it on hiatus, I was expecting college to take up a lot more of my time than it currently is.
I think I'll give this a +1 to my follow list. I look forward to seeing where you go with the story once you have the time to hammer out some more chapters.
sneaky lulu
I loved getting to know Cinnamon's family a little more. Little sister Paprika is a cutie. It was nice of silly Lilly to stop by . I can only imagine the look she must've been getting from Vanilla. Lots of little bits of world building to flesh out the setting here. Looks like we know the reason for the week long furlough. I think Cinnamon surprised "Celestia" with his demeanour, thoughts and that he wanted to get his fellow guards new beds. I'm giddy about the "Paired Sisters" law even if it's not real. The implication behind the words is what makes me happy. His reaction was reasonable. He's in love with Celestia after all. I'm sure a love for Luna would grow as well. I wouldn't be surprised if a tiny crush has sparked with Luna. Will we get to see what Luna tells Celestia or would that be too spoilery? I'm getting some high hopes for Cinnamon's chances at courting Celestia and Luna too. I look forward to reading the next update.
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Without saying anything that would spoil any big planned plot points aside from the obvious, Cinnamon will learn the process of how the princesses deal with courtship requests that they say maybe to.
I noticed here that Cinnamon's parents have changed races. Last chapter his mother was a pegasus.
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Dang, thought I cleaned all that up. Thanks for the catch She was originally going to be a pegasus but I changed it so a few out of place words slipped through.
Let me help you here.
Thou: informal you, when the person is the subject of the sentence.
"You are my love."
"Thou are my love."
Thee: informal you, when the person is the object of the sentence.
"I love you."
"I love thee."
You: formal you, when the person is higher status than yourself
"You are my princess."
Thy/Thine: ownership, depending on whether the owned item begins with a vowel or a consonant
"That is your car."
"That is thy car."
"That is your apple."
"That is thine apple."
Now, if you want to properly conjugate verbs and add in other archaic words so that there aren't just random middle english pronouns scattered about modern sentences, there's a bunch more work you'd need to do...
"Thou art my love."
"I loveth thee."
"'Tis thy car."
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I’ll see if I can do more words without making it a chore to read. I haven’t been putting a ton of emphasis on the accent; just enough to differentiate her from Celestia.
Methinks there was something in the princess' consideration. A trial, mayhaps a test.