What are you planning my moon? Will you fall victim to the humans charm? And love that you so much crave? Or will you try to help your sister along with this man and be happy for her.

i guess it is debatable who's the naughty one here xD

nice chapter, good work :)

CSE/RGRE

what does CSE mean???

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Casual Sex Equestria.

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thanks

I like how Cinnamon uses Equestrian terms like "everycreature" and "gentlecolty" even internally. Helps sell the point that he's grown up among the ponies. It's little things like that helping to keep the reader immersed in the story. Good job. Thanks for the comfy & sexy update. I look forward to reading the next one.

I've been having trouble keeping track of which tribe each parent is and that's because Vanilla was introduced as a pegasus and Coco was shown to play the dodge game using magic a chapter later, but here the dad closes egg cartons with wings and in another chapter the mom levitated things with magic.

Quote from Family Reunion Chapter

He couldn’t do anything but watch as Vanilla levitated a booster seat from the kitchen, placed it on a chair, and placed the foal in it.

Quote from Regaining Lost Desires* Chapter

Coco greeted the farm pony before grabbing 4 egg cartons and opening one of them to inspect the eggs.
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He closed the first carton and used one a wing to pass it to Cinnamon while the other wing opened the second carton.
[...]
They left the booth and continued walking down the street. Coco grabbed a small shopping list from under a wing and placed a check mark next to the ‘4 dozen eggs.’

It's great to incorporate pony movement and item carrying with their natural abilities, but mixing them up like this will break immersion and leads to a poor conceptualized image of you OC's.

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I think the author has settled on the following:
Vanilla, his mother is a unicorn.
Coco, his father is a pegasus.
Paprika, his baby sister is a pegasus.

so I am not sure if the Celestia in the dream is real Celestia being helped by Luna or it is Luna masquerading as celestia.

I think the latter is more interesting but makes less sense

You know it kind of sad, that Cinnamon has yet to call Paprika "Sister" because that is what she is, isn't it? He got a new sister, I imagine he would be excited would love to play with her and get to know her better or enter into big bro mode.

But so far I think he is reacting no different than their parents getting a pet or opening a daycare of sort. It kind of weird how relax he took the notion of having a sibling now.