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I watch ponies, I read ponies, and I write ponies (on occasion.)

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The stories we tell our children are often far from the truth. Over time, history becomes twisted, condensed, and re-written until what we have left is more myth than fact, and the story of Nightmare Moon is no exception. Now, pieced together from collected documents, diaries, and correspondence, Dr. Twilight Sparkle presents the first accurate history of the events leading up to Princess Luna's mysterious transformation and banishment over 1000 years ago.

(Art courtesy of the great and almighty Heart-0f-Darkness, DA Link: http://heart-0f-darkness.deviantart.com/#/d4kvv7n )

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Well, here it is. I know I said Tuesday but I wanted to write a little bit more of it before submission. Besides, Wednesday is the new Tuesday.

Anyway, I really had some fun with this one (particularly the opening bit.) I like the style and structure, and I think this one is going to be worth finishing. As always, any suggestions or corrections are welcome!

In memory of Rainbow!? :raritycry:

I love the way this has been written, looking forward to the rest :twilightsmile:

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