• Member Since 8th Nov, 2018
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SaharaTheWolfe


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So does this take pleace before the previous story or did Molly survive?

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Molly survived, this is a different story than my other fic.

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Is the equipment in this more modern or from previous decades? The opening gave me the feeling od WWII and Vietnam style fighting

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Oh. So tanks and cars are actually in this universe? Cool

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Yeah, though I don't think Jack is in the position to use one yet

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Companies and people have made hand driven vehicles for handicapped people. At the most he could always swing by Ponyville's local mechanic and have him spruce up something.

"Now where did I put that bucketseat and go kart motor?"

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I know, I was sorta making a bad taste joke, but that idea is in sorta in my head as it can decently change some stuff in the story

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Change is a two way crossroad, either way has their own form of outcome.

*Tools clanging off of table* damnit! Where did that wrench go? I need to finish this for the Ponyville Hospital

I can't wait for more this is a good story so far.

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Thanks, I hope you keep enjoying this

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Are you referring to the radio maintenance?

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No. I was asked to help make a set of leg braces to help with his treatment. Just lost my wren- oh wait found it. It was by my welder.


Why do I smell gas?

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I don't know, but I think he's gonna be gone before you finish the braces

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Actually I'm about finished. Just have to weld and adjust the knee supports.

Also that gas was the acetylene tank leaking. I closed it off

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(Leg braces were something I didn't think of, thanks for reminding me and I'll put them in)

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Oof, you actually wanted a character?

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I mean, you wanted to be a character?

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Nah it's okay. Being mentioned is good enough for me. I enjoy the story as it is anyways

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Oh, thank you. I'm doing my best on this story.

After Jack is paralyzed from the waist down during a naval invasion he must learn to cop with the fact his life will never be the same, but he also has guilt for something else that happened during the battle

You have a typo in your short description. Aside from that everything looks alright so far

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Thanks, I'm trying my best but life stuff is keeping me away from writing.

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