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Flash is gonna get fucked in several different ways, isn't he?
Hot damn, I cannot wait for more. Especially with that set up! I almost kinda feel bad for the guy, almost. And i'm really curious as to what led Sunset down this glorious path.
Well, this has lead to some interesting developments. Though I will say that, personally, I didn't really like how easily Flash went along with everything. Yeah, he's got a big heart, but that doesn't count for much when the person he wants to help refuses to positively acknowledge him.
In case I'll repeat myself, supporting and praising you is no bother to me, because telling how perfect every chapter is may be the only thing I could say for now.
Just to say that, even if Immolation is the strongest chapter in the story for now, everything that comes from you is, in my opinion, flawless, and even if I don't have experience in writing, I think I'm constructive enough, or just a huge supporter of yours to appreciate what you're doing.
Your work, that's not only the tags, themes, or how you've pictured the characters in the story and what happened/will happen to them, but your own way of writing a story is what makes me addicted, and every chapter drove me crazy.
Like if you're telling me you have a Patreon, I would think about donating, because it would be worth it and you deserving this.
This chapter was great, a little quieter than the previous ones, but still leaving the taste of wanting more in the end.
I'm feel sorry for Flesh, something tells me that your face will be dragged along the asphalt many times, and that it will still suffer a lot because of Sunset. I just think that your motivation in supporting Sunset could be better worked on, I understand that he is placed in history as a martyr, but to me that does not quite match the style of what you has written so far. I missed a more real reason for him to help Sunset, beyond moral and unshakeable ethics and a promise he made to himself. But I can also be saying a lot of shit, in that case, ignore my previous comments.
More the important is what matters, keep doing the great work that is being this story.
Waiting for the next chapter.
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Sexually, physically, emotionally and mentally, yes.
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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It sure does.
A change of icon for teh new year, eh?
Who’s talking here? Flash? It’s weird seeing internal thought from someone other than Sunset; it messes with the perspective.
He is smarter than I gave him credit for, apparently.
Though he’s still very naive. Interesting to see where you take his character. I’m hoping you don’t just kill him off, at least, not anytime soon.
You’re getting better at limiting the amount of exposition, just try to keep at it, alright?
It’s always weird remembering the fact that Sunset is an antagonist in this story too, but I’m invested in her descent into literal hell. Hoping to see more mention of Twilight Sparkle soon, but I’m a patient boy.