One bad day changed everything.
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New chapter!
Thank you!
I enjoy to know that I called this chapter a bit and what actually happened, like with previous chapters. ^^
We didn't get a full chapter this time, but I knew we would get one with Twilight's past before entering The Court, and making her choices in her new life.
I'm assuming the guy she shot may not be the one who killed her father and brother.
But meeting Sombra in Berlin? That means he already had some influence in the past.
I liked how this mission is going on and the interactions of Sunset trying to constantly egging on Twilight and her avoiding being too smug, but I think I'll have to read again in detail every specific chapter with Nimbus and everything/one tied to him (his whole operation, who's siding with him, to remember every name and what are/were their position within their organization, Azure involvment, so everything between Sunset's "death" and when The Court stepped in), and also, define who is exactly Vanta in The Court and what he's in charge of, plus guessing who might be the character threatening Sunset at the end, so I may call it before the next chapter comes out ^^.
Thank you, and hoping you're safe and ok during this crisis! 💛❤
Fidgeted.
I love every second of this.
I forgot : I will also check how many times Flamepuff has been either vigilant, quiet, worried of something in the past, other than having his fun and egging Sunset, because everything is going crescendo with him, so does his way to have fun from Sunset.
The bants between Twi and Sun was at times comedic and I gotten some chuckles from the humorously coy dialogue you written for Sunset get towards her partner!
But oh dear, Sunset yet again in tough situation. Should've not brushed off Lil Puff during that pivotal moment. And again, poor Azure being the ceremonial pawn....
Hope you've been staying hygenically safe during these wild times, my dude! Missed your activity round the 'Net!