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Another great chapter, well done. I've also noticed the quality of your writing and storytelling skills is gradually improving as you write, which is a very good thing.
But I have to ask, are any of the other main six going to be playing any part in the story? I really like this story so far, and I wouldn't mind if it was mostly just a Sunset Shimmer and a bunch of OC's story. But I just wanted to know if Pinkie Pie, Rarity, or someone else will be pulled in to the chaotic adventures of Sunset Shimmer, Flamepuff, and Flash Sentry.
Or, here's an interesting idea, maybe even the mention/inclusion of the Sunset Shimmer native of the human world, rather than the one from Equestria? That's not an idea too many Sunset fanfictions touch on, but I feel like it can be done quite interestingly in this fanfic.
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I initially wanted the main six to have a role in the story, but as time went by, the story grew and the directions changed, which affects the characters' roles in the story as well.
In the end, I've decided to not include them, since I realize they won't really fit into Sunset's bleak world. And I also want the idea of making the story as deviant as possible, without having to complicate the plot and also for the story to truly focus on its direction.
But also, keep a look out. The main six may not be included, but there are other mlp characters with pivotal roles that will appear soon in the story. 😉
Oh oh two deaths in one. Shimmy definitely topping the kills. And her "game" of hitman gonna continue until she *In Batista's voice* gets what she wants *end Batista's voice*