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This actually looks like something I should be reading!
I'm going to be perfectly honest, when I first read the title of this story I just....i.ytimg.com/vi/ZBVrPWwSlRM/hqdefault.jpg
sci-set! sci-SET! SCI-SET! oh and Flashy boi.
Your timing was so funny. I was just thinking about this fanfic.
So when Sunset said she could have three women in the club, she was being literall
Interesting with the Sci-Twi flashback, wonder if she will reappear in the story
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She will reappear.
>Flash
Alright, alright. I'm liking the story so far. I can put up with Flash for now. I think.
Ah, I can always do with some criminal Sunset. No idea why, but I'm just drawn to this kind of stuff.
Either way, I got a bad feeling about Flash. He's a guard in the other world, so if he's a police officer here, something's gonna go down.
To every chapter that passes I am amazed by their writing ability, and with the appearance of Flash precinct that great things are about to happen.
I'm anxious about the next chapter
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There are worse things to worry about. Trust me.
This story is one of the best I’ve read in a whole, it’s so moving and captivating and I’m gripped more and more with every chapter!
Also I was listening to My Friends by Bohnes whole reading and I felt it fitted Sunset well!
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Thank you, my friend. And that song is going straight into the playlist. 😉
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Yasss I feel honoured! I’m also very much in love with your art! Just thought I’d throw that one out there too 💖
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Your questions will be answered soon.
Also, your comments are actually the ones I look forward to reading the most. They really help, my friend and I thank you. 😉
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+ / - The cliffhanger at the end was predictable, but only because he’s mentioned within the flashback, so I’ll chalk it up as deliberate. I feel like leaving out his name earlier would have strengthened the impact of seeing him.
+ I’m not a fan of flashbacks, and I made that clear in an earlier chapter, but this one really blew it out of the water! The stark contrast between the genuine romance and the grim new reality made me feel bad for Sunset (moreso than I already did, that is).
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I mean this with much love: please stop using redundant narration. I’ve watched Equestria Girls, I know who these two are. Exposition is like fat on a steak, it adds flavor but it needs to be trimmed down to a certain amount, lest it saturates the meat and spoils the flavor. Never tell the audience something they already know or could easily figure out on their own, it makes me feel like you’re holding my hand.
Other than that pet peeve of mine, it was an enjoyable chapter.
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You have no idea how long I've waited for a comment like this. 😂
Anyways, your feedbacks are always appreciated. Thank you.
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Mwah.
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I'll keep that in mind. Nimbus and his crew will make a comeback pretty soon. 😉
At the recommendation of TheNewYorkBrony, I'm coming to check out this story about best HumanPony. I've yet to read it, and I already feel the need to comment:
Now I'm not usually a bettin' man, but I'd be willin' to wager that
EVERYTHING WILL GO WRONG!!
I guess I'll just have to read and see.
That first bit: /)(\
That second bit: the only track playing in my head
That final part...well I'll be damned. Flash Sentry, after all those years.
*struggles to not immediately jump to the fave/like/track routine......and fails miserably*