One bad day changed everything.
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can't wait too see what kind of damage Sunset can do with an actual plan. It is a little sad that flash went out with such a whimper though but I guess you can say that it was a case of "the game was rigged from the start." over all a good chapter keep up the good work.
Now she has the intel to turn Canterlot into the hellhole Lil' Puffy was hoping for...a one-woman army to bring Armageddon...too damn bad Flashy can't be there to witness such a thing. riiiiiiight?
Sidenotes: Firstly, oh lord the Nightmare Fuel visual of a charred Sunset still being able to deliver a can of whoop-ass tho. And I thought herself during that Handicap scrap in the earlier chapter was bad enough!
Secondly, now I know when the trenchcoat-donning, visably-scarred Sunset is now her main look going forward! Just need that frizzled bacon hair, haha.
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Is it time to pull out the new cover? Haha!
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Think it's time to do it to 'em.
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Boom!
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It's the perfect time for him to show y'all the evolution of the destruction of the former Element of Empathy, trust me.
When did you change the picture?
It fits so much with what's going on in the latests chapters.
About feedback or criticism, as one simple reader, :all of your chapters are flawless.
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Sorry I don't know why my post has been answering to you :/
I mean I didn't mention you before sending it.
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I changed it the same day just yesterday, moments before you asked. ☺
I really like what your doing with this story so far, I don't see a lot of stories where people use a lot of OC's as the main enemy and make it genuinely interesting.
But I have something I'm really interested about. The whole situation with Sunset's dying, as in, she dies, comes back, and a little part of her is lost each time that happens. I wanted to ask, the more she does this/this happens, are there going to be more physical changes? Like, everytime she comes back, she looks more demonic? Or, at least, is slowly looking less and less human? If so, is there a limited amount of times she can die and come back before she just isn't even Sunset anymore?
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She has seven lives, and yes, everytime she dies she loses a part of herself, both in the physical and moral aspects.
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Oh wow, that's a very excellent insight on her deformation as the story progresses! I had the hunch her physical and mental state would be stripped layer by layer but also morally as well.
The whole scene with the cremator was AMAZING.
So good!
I'm slightly disappointed the guy didn't ask her what the hell she is because I could see Sunset one-lining something like "What? Can't you tell? I'm a fucking unicorn!"
So she's been growing schizophrenic for a long while and now we know the origin. But we don't know what it was supposed to do. If we're to believe Sunset, Flamepuff is a manifestation of it. I want to believe this madness/invulnerability and healing factor is related to the experiment and the demon/hell stuff is just part of her madness. Maybe throw in some innate pony magic and her being tainted from her first corruption back in high school. Maybe dying was like a catalyst? Silly theories.