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Aside the fact that you're very talented when it comes to your artstyle, which is amazing and strongly depict the theme of the story, I love that story as much and I'm happy to have witnessed the 1st chapter release, being one of your first readers ever.
I love how, as you say, childish the demon is, by it's look, how you've drawn him and it's attitude in the story overall with Sunset.
I know you've said that your art isn't necessarily canon regarding the story, but it is so accurate and explicit that it's difficiult not not see them as canon.
If you're planning to draw anything that might end up canon, it wouldn't be a priority for me, because both your story and your artstyle are separate things you excel at, and I assume it would only be to put an emphasis on an event from a chapter you've already released, or maybe to tease us, even if it could spoil us a bit, implying that whatever may come next could be strong with a lot of feels.
I'm very fond of the "Can I eat your spine?" art you've made, one of your first draws if I recall, it represents exactly who Flamepuff is.
Childish, cute but still evil ❤.
He's asking so nicely you can't say no to him -3-
Again, your art may not be canon but that quote would the only thing I'd love reading Flamepuff say anytime.
Like I'm used to always say around here : any good incomplete story is worth waiting, no matter how long any hiatus may be.
So keep going with the quality and take your time, because I'm really into your story and can't wait to see how it'll develop.
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Thank you so much. This story will be accompanied by art, so hopefully anyone could have a look on the visuals.
I hope you will enjoy until the end of this. 😊
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*sends roasted flowers via flying Flamepuff*
I’m glad you renabled the comments and ratings for this story. I was going to compliment you earlier on the effort displayed on the story page alone but wasn’t able to.
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I apologize for that. I didn't notice until someone pointed it out. But thank you and I hope you enjoy. 😊
besides being very good at drawing you also write very well, looking forward to the next chapter
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Thank you very much. 😊
Wow. Just, wow. This was a great read. But I couldn't quite get a certain Meat Loaf song out of my head while reading the last half of this chapter.
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I totally get that 😂 glad you enjoyed.
Alright, I finally got around to reading this, here’s my initial critique:
The Good:
Good characterization from Sunset and I’ve already taken a liking to Flamepuff. The artwork is stellar and the premise has some great potential. Hard to say much more since it’s the first chapter but I like where it’s going so far.
The Bad:
The introduction is kind of a slog. Large chunks of needless exposition where the meat of the story only really begins when Flamepuff starts talking. A couple of syntax errors here and there, like “sheild” instead of “shield.”
Verdict:
You earned my upvote and I will continue reading. Please don’t disappoint and don’t forget to edit everything one last time before publishing each chapter.
No mention of Equestria/Celestia/Ponies? Wondering if omitted intentionally or simply not considered? Routing for the 1st option, since the implications of the other girls abandoning Sunny is strong, there might be a history going on with all of them. Got a bit of a Disenchanted Luci/Bean vibe with Flamepuff/Sunset.
I was waiting for this story! I didnt even realize you had posted it! There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that turns me off from the story. If you need an editor I'd be happy to help!
Huh. I've had the same thoughts about Sunset dealing with going crazy before; possibly dealing with her demon form from the first movie. That's nothing new. But the little demon? That's new. Though I couldn't help but read his dialogue in the voice of this character:
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aww no dirty?
Damn this is good. The chapter itself, is a blowout! I cant wait to read the rest. Looking forward to more, so thanks for the read.
The first thing I thought of when she hopped on her bike was the song Madman, by Peter Cornell. Overall, feels like it fits, it me.
Feels like mimicry