One bad day changed everything.
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Woah
Sorry for being late, I'm working very early everyday and I tend to rest the afternoon.
I have content to talk about the last 2 chapters, and I will deliver ;).
I feel so very bad for sunset. She didnt deserve to have her happy life swipped away like that. Why didnt she go back to equestria tho?
This is getting really interesting.
Because I am asking myself: What is Flamepuff?
He could very well be a part of the drug, some sort of hallucination manifested after a long time of mental degradation and madness.
But if not, then the consequences could be devastating. After all, without the experimental drug enhancing Sunset, and with termination pending soon, on what else could she fall back to but the Devil‘s power? And if her „programming“ is shut down after her termination, and she rises again, she might have the capabilities to go to war again.
We shall see.
Just read Amelioration and Spectre.
Since Hauntings, I kinda gave up on guessing who was behind Sunset at the end of the chapter, mostly because I have a difficult time to remember all the characters just like that, instead of looking at one specific chapter to remember who they are, what part they've played and when they've died.
So I didn't check every chapter to search who was dead or not, and who could've had a reason to come back to Sunset with revenge in mind.
That's why I'd like to know, when the story will be finished (not too soon though 🥺), do you plan to make a list of every character, their place in X organization and possibly in which chapter did they appeared/died, or something like an organizational chart?
I can name only a few and their roles so far.
I wasn't expecting you to bring back Flash, but I understand why since you made art with him a lot ^^
Now I'm curious. Even if bringing back Flash has no tie with the story or isn't the reason he has been taken by Rave, it seems he just collected dead people around to test or control.
Meaning that all the people Sunset killed or was responsible for their death could be now a threat.
So I'm wondering (and me not remembering well the character takes place here), if Rave was at Vegas when Sunset has been given the protoype, maybe they killed her before injecting her the drug?
Unless, because it was the prototype, they didn't to kill her in the first place.
It depends on how long Rave's cure took, but I bet anything that it didn't make Flamepuff go away (because there is no known cure for Flamepuff fanboys).
And it adds more to his mystery and existence, if he's not the result of Sunset's broken mind and the drug, even if everything points out to that way (that every action of Flamepuff was just Sunset's body healing and she interpreted it by Flamepuff physically doing something to her).
I know you wouldn't end him like that, he deserves better and he will play his true part in the end.
Also, he still has so many spines to eat by asking nicely.
Sunset and Twilight had their second big talk.
Feels. Lot of feels. What would this story be without them?
I'm happy that you confirmed the presence of Sunset's diary, even if she got rid of it, and them going to CHS, even if it didn't really mean anything.
Maybe you'll hint her geode next. If not I'm still satisfied.
And the mention of P. Twilight.
If the diary has not been damaged in the ocean, I'm sure P. Twi came back to check on Sunset, just once, but couldn't because at the time she was "hiding" from Twilight and the rest of the world, and assumed she didn't want to be found.
Even if Twilight forgave Sunset, the reason why she's bent on judging and wanting Sunset to feel so destroyed like her before is because everything she went through since their break-up?
So she didn't completely forgave her then?
I wonder what Sombra really thinks about Sunset or any use he can gain from her now. Or if he really wants her dead.
Regardless of her being cured, Vanta clearly doesn't want her to remain in The Court (or alive), I'd say the same for Twilight though I'm expecting you to drop something big in the final chapters so she might change her opinion but still holds resentment towards her, we'll see.
I think that's it.
Now I have to read most chapters about Nimbus until to the last time he was present.
Thank you for your constant perfect work.
The race is still on, not leaving until the end.
So that's it? Sunset is back to her old, nice self? Or she's been hit with the upgraded version? If so I hope she'll keep her morals.
I can understand Sunset on her stand. Some people are ready to do a lot for people thet love, and (if they're lucky) they're loved back, but also the helped ones feel like they're using them. Feel like parasites, and it hurts. And they're scarred that something will happen to them. Look at Flash, where he ended, poor guy. Azure is not much better. Though she definitely shouldn't cut herself off like that, it only causes more pain. It's a banal at this point but there is no shame in seeking help.
But also Twilight has a reason to be angry. After her brother and father died, she was in pain and needed support. Then her mother... She was an easy target.
Though I do wander about the rest of HuMane 7. Where were they through their pains.
Was it really just a drug? On it's own it's scary that something could turn you intoa onster but, it's just so... simple.
Well, he sure did something. Calling it "save" might be a stretch, though.
Anyway, things don't look too bright. Is it foolish for me to stubbornly clinging to that childish hope that our heroes will find happines or at least ersatz of it in the end?
Wonderful, story by the way. Lots:... lots of emotions.
Whoa...um well, there's A LOT to unpack here.
Sunset being cured, the truth bombs, Twilight and Sombra in a relationship, Sunset alluding to her past self with the diary and the CHS statue...gawd damn Nimbus White mentioned after HOW LONG? And what happened to Flamepuff?!?
And with all of that...I dunno this "thing" you speak of. It's been a long while since reading the earlier chapters...