A young colt enter Ponyvillle... but they don't know what his true purpose... and when that... comes to light, will it be to late...
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can't wait for more chapters. This is definitely a good fic
1024182
Thanks for the comment, really the story is a bit far pass this, but I have to read over it and edit. But yeah it'll be out soon...more to say but down the line...
1025833 need a editor? I'm HORRIBLE when writing but was the top of my class when it came to spelling and grammar
1025951
It's more then that, I'm writing down the story as I see it play in my head, so I'm skipping a lot of things that I wanted to put down, and have to go back by section to edit and put in, if you still see error in my story please tell me, and I'll think about talking you up on your offer, after I finally edit it of course, that way it'll be miss use of words or grammar,
1026026 k If I spot any spelling or grammar errors I'll tell you in the comments.
This is a good fic but I hope your able to put out updates quicker
1036798
Truth be told, I could be putting out maybe one to three chapter a day, if I wasn't so busy reading others.
But for you I'll try to put out three today if not one.
1036869 I'm happy with one a day, or at least one every 1-3 days. Not one every week or one every month though
DAYUM THAT BOY'S GIFTED! But I'm glad you took my advice and made a chapter every one or two days instead of one a week.
This is interesting and in the description I'm glad you said 'Well he's not exactly death' cause you know NOTHING of my work.
1047765
?...Oooo I get it... yeah I got a chuckle out of that one.
I would suggest you separate sentence everytime somepony speaks. Like this:
"____________" Rainbow chuckled at Twilight, flying in the circles around the lavender Unicorn.
Twilight gave her a belligerent look before rebutting Rainbow Dash somewhere along of the lines of "____________"
I also would suggest you to find a editor or proof-reader, refer to my userpage's group. You should see one group that I've joined. Find someone there who would be willing to fix/polish up your story to make it more readable and likeable.
1050717
Thank you, I'll try to do that next chapter.
1050760
Maybe later, I want to try to do this one by my self.
“You want into the Everfree Forest?!” am what?
1089612
If you can just tell me the chapter, I'll correct it.
1089680 last ch
1090672
I don't understand your concern?
....I mean I think I understand.... I just don't know what you want me to say...