Petalbeam is a pony who just wants to find her special talent and she knows that she will never find it in Cyrodiil, so she moves to Skyrim to find it, only to find out that she is alot more special than she first thought.
Note: I have changed the story in the fiction, as to avoid spoilers.
Note: I DO NOT OWN SKYRIM
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This was inevitable...
And i approve Greatly
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
~My Little Dovahkiin,
~My Little Dovahkiin,
~Fus Ro DaaaaAAAAHHH-
Anyway. Your writing style is good. You need to make your chapters longer though. Considering the length of Skyrim, you're going to end up with like a hundred chapters. Like, the first chapter should probably be the entire Helgen scene. Also, start a new paragraph every time someone speaks.
Other than that, good good good. Fluttershy will always be superior Dovahpony though, but w/e.
...Where the hell are all the other crossovers man!! You'd expect something as free plotwise, and popular as Skyrim should have fanfics and crossovers coming out the ass!
Eagerly waiting for the parts of the story that don't seem like retelling of admitedly awsome scenes.
I liked it, but longer chapters please.
So your writing a skyrim crossover without owning a copy of skyrim?
Okay, thank you guys for the comments, I'm now working on Chapter 2 as we speak and, yes I will make longer chapters, Chapter 1 was short so I could get an idea of what you guys think.
FUS RO DAH!
The conversation with the elder sounds REAAAAALLLY rushed mate. Gives off the feeling like you're saying "this is an important part of the story, but I don't care so I'm rushing through it".
59236 It sorta was, but I'm intending to revisit it and improve it, I'm going to blog when I improve it.
You overreacted...
They're already here
4chan told of their return
They're defeat was mearly an illusion
From the time after artoftrolling opened
When the sons of ponychan would spill their own tolerance
But kno one wanted to believe
Believe they even existed
And when tue trolls finally dawned
They dawned in flame war!
But...
There is one they fear...
In their tounge he is "a gay ponyfag"
PONYBORN!
75450
lol your comment made my day
Ouch...
i will not read this until u have bought and played skyrim
4301089 well yes or no