After failing to commit suicide during the Anon-a-miss fiasco, Sunset Shimmer gains some unlikely friends, one of which may become something more...
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I expected the confrontation with Twilight and the Rainbooms to be longer, but still good.
Great chapter overall!
Want more please, danke!
Huh. I possible would have thought this chapter would also have the five trying to make it up to Sunset after Twilight yelled at them and returned to Equestria, but I guess that might happen sometime in the next chapters.
And at least Sunset’s life is getting so much better now
uh are we in the future?
Let me guess: The Dazzlings are just using Sunset to get their powers back.
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I mean, there comes a point that you're so disgusted with someone that you can't even stand to be in their presence.
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i can name a number of people i feel the same way about.
Oh come on! Twilight's confrontation happened off-text? (That's what I call the fanfic version of "off-screen") Ah well, it's we got stuff out instead of it being completely skipped. Anyways,
That's the all prove you all need of one thing: Your arrogance and judgment stood in the way of the truth. And for that; now that you all have lost Sunset, Twilight and the elements of harmony (No doubt about it), you all have paid the price.
I need more! This has to be one of the best Annon-a-miss fics i have ever read!
has Sunset considered asking Twilight for some equestrian bits or some gems she could sell for cash in the human world, also i'll bet the dazzlings could come up with fool proof identification for sunset
yass i loved this chapter
I actually feel sorry for the Rainbooms yeah stupid, but they got it harsh, and brutal, words can affect and hurt.
Thou i feel least sorry for Rainbow, due to how she help SpitFire and Soarin and the wondercolts stuff Sunset in to her locker, and later Spitfire helped to add to Sunset's break down.
AppleJack as she failed to see Sunset was being honest, and her own little rotten to the core sister was the one behind it all.
Will you write how the CMC gotten punished or dealing with what happened?
Now out of all the Rainbooms, I have to say this, due to some other Anon A Miss Fics, she I can see thinking Sunset gone back to her old ways, due to she could been easily Sunset's number 1 victim. Fluttershy, before she changed, but that depends on the fic, in the first movie, you see Sunset threatening Fluttershy and seems to been a common thing vibe I got from it.
How badly did she treat her up to the writer of the fic.
I remember a one shot set after the Fall Formal, Sunset dealt with a lot of guilt, the worst was what she did to Fluttershy, shortly after first meeting.
It was thanks to Sunset Fluttershy couldn't eat hard foods or apples unless she had them cut in certain manner permanently.
Also maybe I was a liiiiiittle too harsh with the Rainbooms
Nah. Not in this situation.
I like this story, have a like and fav... and my two-cents cause I'm bored... WALL OF TEXT
While I can respect your version of these charters I really can't see Twilight losing it and dropping F-bombs like the USA drops military bombs. I can see her losing her shit and start using more "eloquent" words and phrases to tell how others have they fucked up. (I can see Twilight saying something similar to Arcade Gannon from Fallout: New Vegas when the Cuiror pisses of Arcade(Can't find a clip)).
Yes, Twilight poured salt into the Rainbitches wounds. I, however, feel if she kept her bookworm charm and style she could not only pour salt but reopen wounds by telling Rainbitches what she told them with far fewer curse words, and a mix of anger and disappointment. If you think about it, the Rainbitches feel bad cause they fucked up; they hoped to amend the feeling of "I dun fucked up" by at least letting it be known to Sunsmimmy that they are aware that they fucked up. Rainbitches could have hoped they would be able to start to fix things eventually. To be denied the little they might feel better for apologizing coupled with the knowledge they have caused book horse to be let down to such a degree, I can imagine would hurt all the more.
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What Vic are you talking about I want to read it it sounds good
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Not sure, I read it over a year ago, and sadly didn't favorite it. But ti was a good one shot, and Sunset did her best to make up to Fluttershy what she did to her.
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Oh ok do you know any of the tags? Might narrow it down
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Sighs ok ok ok I'll try to find it. Be a pain but ok.
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No don’t worry about it it’s fine I can look
I think Twilights sense of friendship is flawed. Didn't her pony friends and mentor abandon her at the wedding? And also never apologized? Also didn't sge practically turned an entire town twince on RD cause she was being herself? If Twilight is the princess of friendship then she really needs to work around those kinks.
The Mane 6 should of apologized after tge wedding
And Twilight should've apologized for ruining RDs reputation and sorta life.......TWICE!
Yeah, I think Twilight could scold them but at least try to help mediate things so that both parties can have some form of closure. Although, that is my opinion.
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I blame the writers for that crap. Thou in slight defense Twilight did accuse Candace with out proof, BUT the other should not had acted as they did.
Celestia above all should of listened to Twilight thou.
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Yes but you forget, Sunset was shoved into a locker, and Rainbow was part of the group that did it, she laughed LAUGHED at Sunset's suffering thinking she had every right to do so.
There no excuse and Rainbow deserved to get chewed out big time for that, unless you can justify pushing someone who has a fear of enclosed spaces into their locker.
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But hey. It gives Bitty Bug a excuse for the Mane 6 to chew Twilight out for how sge treated the Humane 6. Technically what they did to Sunset is same to what the Mane 6 did to Twilight
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Yeah, that needs to be addressed. Hell, Rainbow can confess and name the others as well. Just to receive punishment.
Still like to know what happens to the CMC, how bad is their punishments, do they get suspended, do they get expelled, how their families react and so. Parents and Granny smith and such.
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True, but they thought Twilight was overreacting, but at the same time after Lesson Zero, they did promise to take her worries more seriously.
Thou honestly maybe just to make sure nobody got caught in the crossfire of her going Coo Coo in the head again.
WOW! Twilight needs help, thou blame Celestia, she may of turned the filly into a neurotic mess by accident with all her tests and chessgames.
niiice loved the 2 chapters it was fun
a bit harsh but i dont really care. though im wondering how it looks up. and to who it starts looking up for.
With Sunset blocking the Rainbooms' numbers, she can officially close the dark chapter in her life! These 2 new chapters worth the long wait!
Your still updating this every Monday, right, cause you can't just leave off right there
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I don't know.....something tells me it won't be that easy......
Maybe the Rainbooms being different from the Mane 6 versions is a good thing. Maybe that means they can eventually start again. Eventually here being a vague term for "sometime before the heat death of the universe", but, you know. Better than never.
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Oh boy, foreshadowing much?
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Yup! I'll be back to the usual Monday updates from here
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Nope, not in this fic! They're genuinely reformed; though still a bit mischievous, they're good at heart
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Yup! One of the upcoming chapters will be focusing on the Mane Five and the CMC dealing with the ramifications of their actions (probably not the next chapter though, I think the Five have had enough suffering for the time being )
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OH DAMN, that would have been a better way to go... oops I sort of went for the more "blinded by rage" route, where shock value makes it impactful; Mane Five certainly wouldn't expect quiet Twilight to be exploding at them! But I do agree, keeping her grace would have been better. Twilight will definitely remain more in character in her future appearances
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na, after sleeping on it your is twilight good too. Its like she can get more emotional but still lacks the skill to control it still. She is fairly new to the whole "My life is not all about books anymore." Anywhere from 1 to 6 years depending on who you ask. Most humans, at least, would get an idea of how to act around age 11 then get fucked up by hitting puberty (from what I remember from psychology).
I wonder how long it will take before the Rainbooms become aware of the additional wall between them and Sunset.
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Rainbow: Vice-Principal Luna.
Luna: Yes, Ms. Rainbow Dash?
Rainbow: Could I speak to you?
XXX
Luna: So you all shoved her in a locker and locked her in.
Rainbow: That's right.
XXX
Spitfire: What the hell, Dash!?
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Not sure what that theoretical conversation has to do with the blocked numbers, but yeah I imagine telling authority figures about gross misconduct would make for another barrier of entry.
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Rainbow Dash tries to at least take punishment for what she did to Sunset, even naming names of the others involved. It's about punishing herself.
The sad thing about the Rainbooms in this story is that they're actually worse than their little sisters. At least the CMC thought about what they were doing, finally realised they were wrong, and actually confessed of their own free will, knowing that they were going to be punished.
The Rainbooms were so busy being self-righteous victims that, unlike their sisters, they never even bothered to consider the possibility that they were in the wrong, let alone whether their behaviour was appropriate regardless of what they thought the situation was.
The pacing in this story is awesome. Things happen quickly enough to maintain interest, but slowly enough to let me get into the scenes. Bitty seems to know just the right amount of time to the various descriptions of things. I love it!
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Yay, and also, where do you get those pony emojis?
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I think they come with the FIM Fiction website! There’s a little smiley face tab that has them all listed.
(Hmmm... this quick version does work for me. It was already done by the Sirens after all, so everything Twilight did was just more fuel on the fire... and anger. Anger letting itself out heavily... goodness knows she has plenty of reason for it. And also, Twilight can curse! Good to know. Now, further examining...
Half of that statement is good and fine. The other half? Is pretty much impossible. Even the most innocuous objects CAN kill you if you work on it right. Heck, drinking too much water can kill you. TRIPPING can kill you. Still, I do agree with the confiscating of sharp objects and other objects that can obviously be used for that purpose, the more difficult you make it, the less likely they'll find something when in a mood or when the sudden 'break' happens, and the more time to help them stop it and move through it.
Most of this is good, however I would mandate weekly meetings with a mental health professional, or weekly meetings with herself, instead of a two-month waiting period. Though the provisions that practically guarantee extended time with Trixie does insure a constant check-up of one kind.
This whole scene was very sweet... and very much needed, for both of them. They needed to have that serious one on one talk, cry some things out... and hug. Seriously, ponies are a very physically affectionate species, and I find it adorable!
Now, some closing thoughts. One, yes, it was satisfying to see Sunset block the numbers, and it's very appropriate that she does this to the Rainbooms right after promising to not block out Twilight again. Let in the good, keep out the bad. And, with that in mind, I get the feeling we're probably going to be seeing a good deal less of the Rainbooms and their thoughts, feelings, opinions, etcetera, on the matter... Also, Adagio's flirting with Twilight was quite fun. She's obviously enjoying getting the little rises out of Twilight... it might be interesting if the two of them interact more often and actually become something of a thing, could be interesting! Could be cute. And yes... Sunset's moving in the right direction. May she continue to strive forward into a better mindset and life.)
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I bet, If I really wanted to, I could kill myself with this Cellphone. Anything's a weapon.
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(Indeed! I'm not going to start talking about how, mainly in case other readers are squeamish or don't want to go into the details, but I can think of a couple of ways right off the back. Now they partly depend on the size and durability of said cellphone, so it could take some work. But if you were dedicated, then yes, you could definitely kill yourself with that.
Though if you were in the middle of a mental break when trying, you'd be much more likely to fail with the attempt, or seek something else out entirely. Which is why I do agree with the removing the things that can easily be used to cause harm.)
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yeah, a threat and Cadance acting OOC, Twilight was more right then wrong.