After failing to commit suicide during the Anon-a-miss fiasco, Sunset Shimmer gains some unlikely friends, one of which may become something more...
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Well, I'm glad to see Twilight took Human Trixie being an alicorn very well.
Congrats, Sunset. You finally found true happiness in your life. And it all came from three former enemies and a student who holds a special place in your heart. Not from another group of students that; to me, shall forever remain nameless.
Sad to see this particularly astounding piece of lesbian performance art ending (that's what it is, after all, with all the dancing around Sunset and Trixie do) but happy to hear more is coming. Definitely one of my favorite Anon-a-miss tales, and that's saying something considering my unhealthy obsession with them.
I am guessing the Rainbooms are miserable and are no longer relevant to the story then.
Hmm, nice end. My heart had the warm and fuzzies there at the end as Sunset admired her new family.
And hopefully I'll catch your sequels... I'm really interested in the Adagio and Twilight sidestory.
Like your work. Hope to see more soon.
I forgot. Was Anon a miss exposed?
Yesssss! This has to be one of the best anon-a-miss fics I've ever read! I can't wait for your other works!
ya know... Its been years since I watched Lilo and Stich, be it the movie or the television series and you know what, this is bringing some memories back.
Well done BittyBug, you've created an excellent story and telling of Anon-A-Miss. I can't wait to see what you come up with for the others✔ 💯
Oh wow... that ending... Well done! That was beautiful!
Lilo and Stitch already hit me in the heart, and this just doubled up on that punch.
I think we can all finally say, "Welcome to the human world, Sunset!" It's gonna suck to read the final chapter, but its been a hell of a ride!
It’s always a kind of bitter sweet feeling to see a story wrap up. On one hand I want more, but at the same time I realize the story is incomplete without its ending. This, I think, is quite fitting.
I pity the unicorn Trixie. If she can sense any time somepony laughs at her expense she must never have a free moment.
Aww that was so cute
I’m kinda sad it’s over though lol
This feels like such a nice finale. (Even though there's still ground to cover), a nice and heartwarming end to a chapter before we get on with the next. . . usually something bad happens after stuff like this so-
Dont you fucking dare..!
This fic is so awesome and you my friend keep up the good work!!
I . . . have a question about the timing of this. Or maybe it's a question about divergence from canon. Not sure.
Basically: Starlight.
Canonically Starlight's redemption happened in Equestria at the same time the Friendship Games happened in the human world. So either the Friendship Games came and went without me noticing it, or in this story Starlight was redeemed earlier than in canon.
I guess the question is: which of those is true?
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My dumb ass forgot about that so I’m just going to say that the canon timeline diverges from here
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The Rainbooms have served their purpose for this story
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Yup! Chapter 9, “We Fucked Up”
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I’m man enough to say this made me tear up a good bit at times, and very few things make me cry. This was, hands down, the best fanfic I’ve ever read out of many. You are pretty fantastic at writing and thanks for occupying my whole day off today!
This fic has been pretty damn important to me, helped me through some rough times recently and with the bow wrapped up all i have to say is......D'AWWWWW
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There's nothing wrong with forgetting a detail like that.
Plus, enough variables changed that it's not unreasonable for Twilight to have redeemed Starlight sooner. (Especially given that stalker-mode Starlight is the most available of any villain. All Twilight would need to do is notice.)
Eagerly awaitng the next chapter
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The ending of this chapter made my heart hurt and made me squeal in happiness.
So, I'm a bit of a sucker for heartwarming stories. While I usually don't enjoy the ones that go to the higher extremes, this story was one of the exceptions. It felt a lot like a 'what if this scenario was happening in a more realistic world', which was the intention, if I remember correctly.
There's lots of promise for follow ups, i've not looked at your profile yet, so I don't know if you've already started on them or anything. Regardless, you mentioned some fun ideas, though I will note that something including Pony Trixie wasn't included. Thinking of a Twilight/Adiago pairing branches into pony land, though i think there could be some benefit in a story tied to this maybe showing Twilight that her Trixie isn't what they think she is. This story made a real effort to differentiate the two Trixies from Twilight's perspective, which has its possibilities attached. Something to think about.
Otherwise, I usually roll my eyes at stories that bring the bashing, but this one differed from a lot of others by treating the characters as if they were human, and while harsh, did feel like realistic high school drama that maybe tilted a bit into darker territory. All in all, I didn't want to put it down when the bashing started, and that's seriously an achievement.
I greatly enjoyed the story. I'l have to keep an eye out for further writing from you.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
My heart is absolutely full of happiness for Sunset finding her family.
The sad part will be when i read the last few words.
I really like this universe you created.
Wonder how Friendship games wotlrk out with this new group of friends and Midnight Sparkle.
Starswirl stumbled across frakking Multiversal Theory!?!? Such a pity he was such an idiot about it…