After failing to commit suicide during the Anon-a-miss fiasco, Sunset Shimmer gains some unlikely friends, one of which may become something more...
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Oooh, buildup! The next chapter's gonna be great!!
Keep going!
*Raises eyebrow*
Ok, the actions of Sunset and Co towards the Rainbooms seem farfetched but at least somewhat plausible. But Twi's reaction here is ludicrous.
I never read the whole anon-a-miss thing (though I have read enough fanfics about it to at least get the gist), but by now I'm pretty sure this is just a revenge fic towards the Rainbooms from the author in response to that story.
Not a bad thing necessarily. Still enjoying the thing enough to want to finish reading it.
9064798![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
You’re definitely right about Twilight here, she’s a biiiit out of character. Things turned out this way, though, because I was sort of struggling with the transition in the story from ‘rock bottom’ to ‘recovery.’ Twilight’s kinda my transition character
Don’t worry though, future depictions of Twilight will be more in character.
Adagio has a lady boner for twilight and I'm more than ok with that
im am SOOO ready twi's gonna rip them apart
Like the idea of Adagio and Princess Twilight.
But part of me imagines Sci Twi and Adagio as well, maybe Adagio helps her get confidence.
Not lie, I love that Adagio was turn on by a raging Twilight, I sense a kinky relationship in their future![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Me when I saw Twilight was going after the Rainbooms
Ŏ̸͔̮̥̼̤̇̒h̶̢͔̞̜̍̇̀͊̀ ̴͖̜̲̀̒̋͆̈́̽ͅG̵̤̳͖͔̞̍́ͅō̶̳̖̒͝d̶̛͚̊̍̀́͋ ̷͙̺̫̳͎̟͋ọ̷̠͍́͛̒̾ḩ̷̟̗̝̐ ̴̢̨̛͑f̸̲̓̑̏ŭ̶̙̭̪̫̿̑͝͝ͅc̵̢̟̑k̷̝̤̤͔͋͌͐̀̎
To quote Lily Orchard:
"Aw, snap! Aw, snippety snap!"
Love the dead to me line.
(Ah, kind of late, but nice chapter! If anything, I would have liked to see even more of Twilight's reactions through the various parts of the story... and also more hugging, because Twilight hugging Sunset right out of the gate was adorable!
Ah, as for now... when the anger fades, I'll want to see how much guilt Twilight internalizes. She has always been hard on herself for failures, and she was the one who left Sunset in their hands... she can't really ignore that I don't think, it'll likely need to be addressed. Oh, and...
I sense some bad girl shipping... I am completely okay with this.
Oh, and I forgot to mention. I think Trixie handled things rather maturely. Direct and open honesty about reasoning, intention, and identity, are all the appropriate way to go, and obviously she told Sunset pretty much right after she finished writing. So, very good on her part. I think she handled that the best she could given the situation, and it worked out rather well.)
Ah twilight, I think you might be repressing a few...
But seriously, While their betrayal of Sunset on its own was reason enough for Twilight to get truly mad, I suspect that memories of her own friends abandoning her combined with that to produce the seemingly uncharacteristic level of rage. I also wouldn't be at all surprised if a few of the things she says to the Rainbooms are things she wished she could have said to her friends after that.
Also, I just wanted you to know I've really been enjoying this story.
Grabs popcorn, Midnight comes early.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Amazon Alert!
its been shipped
Trust them they have been around the block several times
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That may be true, but the Equestrian version of the Mane 5 were never outright horrible to her or cut off all ties of friendship with her.
Plus, A Canterlot Wedding may, In My Honest Opinion, have been a terrible mess of an episode, but I'd still take it over the Anon-A-Miss comic anyday.
YOU HEAR THAT COMIC?! YOU ARE SO HORRIBLE THAT YOU MAKE ONE OF MY MOST HATED EPISODES OF MLP LOOK GOOD!
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That's thing I've thought about that and the Humane 5 may not have been that out of character, it took Sunset literally a few texts to break them apart completely for years when all they needed to do was talk to one another, they weren't exactly that good at that friendship and then the next time we see them they have almost fallen part again in Rainbow Rocks
Ahem...remember the whole thing with Discord? Or a Canterlot Wedding, where they abandoned you without so much as a second thought?
I do like the story, though I wasn't a fan of the situation. Of course Twilight would be mad, but still it did go rather far. The Dazzlings and Trixie tore into them already and now Twilight wanting to go that far as well seems over the top in a way. Like beating a dead horse. There is no real closure, or them letting it go. Just to calm down again instead of bullying the Rainboom's now. It just feels like they are about to do the same thing in a sense as was done to Sunset. Sure, they did fuck up and Sunset did not, but does that really justify it? And I do understand where they are coming from seeing how Sunset did commit two suicide attempts. But let's be honest here, what if they go to far and one of the Rainboom's tries to commit suicide as well?
And yeah, it might sound strange but I'm also hoping for redemption. It is the shows theme. Reformation and second chances. Love instead of Hatred no matter how corny it may sound.
9483486![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I think you’ll be happy to know that there will be redemption and reconciliation in the sequel- in this fic, I mostly wanted to focus on Sunset and Trixie’s journey together. The next one will be TwiDagio centered, but the Rainbooms will be back; I do love happy endings, after all
H O L Y!
M O T H E R!
O F!
C E L E S T I A!
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To be fair, Discord had chaos magic, and It was a wedding, something you could expect somebody to behave differently at
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