After failing to commit suicide during the Anon-a-miss fiasco, Sunset Shimmer gains some unlikely friends, one of which may become something more...
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Come on, everyone. It's on me. Let's go to Sugarcube Corner and pick up some cupcakes for their little pity party.
Anyways, Heh heh heh! Now that you've learn the truth Rainbooms, you have now seen the light and have realized how much of a failure of friends you all truly are!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
And soon, you will all see how Trixie and Dazzlings have succeeded where you all miserably and pathetically failed.
Honestly I think SunTrix is a great ship. I can't wait for their confession to each other. The crusaders confession felt a little rushed but tolerable. I would like to have known exactly what it is that drove Sunset to attempt the unthinkable again.
Also where's Princess Twilight?
I'm sorry but... What the hell is this?! Sunset trying to kill herself again ok, but just out of the blue, no build up no reason, she had the sirens and Trixie, It feels like Sunset was doing ok and thought. "aaaww hell why not. "Dunks some pills down and falls over.
i reread the last chapter wondering if you added something or maybe missed a chapter. But no.
I figured missed something, but where is the breaking point that causes this to happen? It just feels.......RUSHED, or skipped over...
This nearly ruined the rest of the chapter for me.
Sighs I hope the next chapter is better, and i hope you write some stuff about the other students like the ones who threw Sunset into a locker, Spite Fire was one of them.
Love to see how she reacts to the truth now, and will Sunset have a confrontation with them, and maybe MAYBE put in the details you left out that lead to her trying to kill herself again?
Apple Bloom mentioned a back eye, She had a bad day, how bad was it to make her try to kill herself, despite having her friends new ones there?
Why did you leave it out, it just feel like you threw it in there as a after thought.
I'm sorry but i loved this story, it was well written but this chapter feels .....tossed in, or like you left out details and stuff that would explained things.
At least could put a small scene that lead to it, Sunset rushing home crying hurting again, where were the others as well. Did she get ambushed, did her attackers say something to drive her to this?
You're a great writer a really great writer so that why I feel this chapter could be better.
Also glad you're ok, surgery sounded scary. Glad you're ok now.
Sorry about my little rant as well, but felt a need to express how I felt about this chapter.
And this is why envy is such a dangerous thing.
One thing i am so waiting for. Trixe's YOU FUCKED UP speach to the rainbooms and the rest of the school heck I honestly would not be surprised if she nearly hit the crusaders
Please tell me there's more to come. While this would be a good place to end the fic, I personally would love to see how the rainbooms try to fix this and what Sumset'll do when she gets her hands on the CMC.
This is a great story and a very good chapter. I can easily see Sunset doing what she did, the nature of depression sadly. You might be feeling top of the world one day, and the next rock bottom . It doesn't even take much, even just a few wrong words can cause it. If anyone else says otherwise, ignore them on the matter. It can, and does happen, even if you do have support because they aren't around 24/7 and in Sunset's case, she didn't have anyone living with her. It is not easy to get over it, and Sunset's living situation doesn't help any. I like how you showed that it is more easy to relapse into it than it is to shrug it off. Anyways, doing great here and eager to see more. Hopefully Trixie's mom can help Sunset's situation.
Yes I was right it did partially take sunset being in hospital for the rainbitches to see that it made absolutely no sense for sunset to be doing this. I mean the crusaders came out and said it but sooner or later they would have found out about sunset being in hospital. The rainbitches and all the rest of chs would get curious about sunsets absence and they would tell them forcing the cmc’s to come out and tell the truth boom I was right and I even backed it up
Good chapter by the way
I really loved Rainbow's reaction. Just sitting and stewing before just screaming her lungs out in anger. It felt very Rainbow.
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That was basically what I was referring too. The fact that she came along to help her in any kind of timely manner is a big coincidence even with her worrying about Sunset’s mental state.
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Did you read the story at all? Trixie stated what happened. Sunset tried to kill herself again.
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Yeah, I did. Sorry, My Mistake.
Now that you mentioned it, it doesn't make sense. Sunset was doing fine last chapter. She had a great time with her new best friends. And now she tried to off herself again? I; along with most others, demand an explanation in future chapters of this story.
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All the clues i got was...apple Bloom commented on a black eye, and Sunset had a bad day when she went home that day, and that is it.
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Don't worry. I'm sure we'll all get a flashback in the next chapter or so that will explain all this.
Little hard to follow the transition in Sunset’s status but one of the better reactions to the CMC I’ve seen.
The tension & the emotional drama was unbelievable and by God, worth the wait! So it's finally over, Anon-A-Miss is dead.... Where do we go from here?
(Mmm, I'm actually not surprised that Sunset broke down and tried to kill herself again, even though things were going better... Depression is a vicious beast, and all it takes is one, seemingly minor event, to suddenly make you go from almost okay, to utterly despairing. Things spiral down from there in your head, it's only a matter of how quickly.
In any case, now, the Rainbooms know the truth. The whole school knows the truth. And the Crusaders will now be paying in punishments that will last years for their jealousy, not to mention the crushed relationships with their siblings. Not to mention that now they'll be the targets of the rest of the student body, and without extra curriculum, and the event staining their attempts to get into a decent college... yeah, I'd say they'll be paying for this for a VERY long time. As for the Rainbooms… well, crushing guilt and crushing anger with themselves and the CMC are entirely appropriate, and welcome. Now if we could just crush their hopes for ever, ever reconnecting with Sunset Shimmer in any way even remotely meaningful, my perhaps sadistic need for karmic retribution will be satiated.
No Pinkie. No there does not. Many things can be forgiven and moved past. But betrayal? A betrayal of trust, hope, and the friendship you claimed to have? … It's very few people, very few indeed, who can forgive that. And even if Sunset can 'forgive' you... can look past your transgressions with a remembrance to her own so long ago now and how she was in need of forgiveness, I doubt she can ever again consider you her friends. She has found a truer friendship than yours ever was.
And speaking of, I understand her anger, and I am glad for it. Despair and misery you can do little with, anger? Can be productive when turned the right way. It's certainly better than wallowing at the least.
And that's a very sweet ending, it's good to see them all getting together and... just enjoying one another's company. Doing something sweet. And Sunset thinking on Twilight. Speaking of, I really hope she actually does take all of this as a catalyst to talk to her again... And stop BSing and really get into things and have a heart to heart. Twilight's sin was ignorance and being a bit too naïve and unsure so that she was warded off and lied to too easily. That... is very forgivable, in my humble opinion, and a friendship forged and reforged with her could be a truly strong one.
Also...
I just like that. Just those words together, like it.
And now, finally, I will say thus. This was a good chapter, it made me smile, sometimes for healthy reasons, and sometimes for... errr… well, depends on how one views karmic retribution perhaps on how legitimate those reasons were. However I'm looking forward to the aftermaths of this, and how Trixie handles the Rainbooms… and, finally, as to the Rainbooms, their actions, their general situation, and in reference to the title, I leave this little video...)
Ways-and-means.
OH NO YOU DONT!
you don't get to put sunset through hell for months and then suddenly feel guilty. i hope that when pinkie pie asks Trixie that Trixie just beats her ass.
finally
just FINALLY
I enjoyed this so much. finally a proper punishment for them!
I may have been unclear in my last post. I understand Sunset tried to off herself again, I mean depression is like a rollercoaster. One minute you're going up and the next you're going down. I just want to know exactly what it is that happened is all.
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Don't worry, there is definitely more to come!
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I'm sorry if this chapter fell short! The second suicide attempt is sort of meant to feel sudden. As a few other commentors have pointed out, depression is very fickle and unpredictable; one day you're fine, the next you're trying to overdose on whatever is in your medicine cabinet.
Sunset, though she had an 'upswing' last chapter, is still very fragile. She has friends who love her, yes, but she's still dealing with years worth of untreated depression. That stuff doesn't just go away. Again, I'm sorry if this chapter was lackluster, and i'll try to make up for it in the next one. I'll add some more explanation as well, but it was supposed to be abrupt.
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I'll add some more clarity in the next chapter, but basically Sunset had a very bad day and tried to overdose on some common medicines she had accumulated (a cocktail of advil, asprin, tylenol, etc.)
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Aaahh i see, still could added some details that would explained things. The suddenness felt off.
but those are my thoughts.
Still glad they confessed, thou way too late, for the CMC, would be far better for them to fess up way before then.
With all the punishments they gotten.
I applaud you on it, no they get a few months detention, they get some real punishments.
that going to last their entire school life, and add on how their parents may react.....
Still hope Sunset has a confrontation with SpitFire and the wondercolts soccer team.
Sure they be wanting to crawl under a rock, if they learn Sunset has a fear of enclosed places, and with them shoving her in a locker.
Dash was there at the time and helped, wonder if it was her idea.
Will Sunset get some therapy for her depression, sounds like she really needs it....Who am i kidding. Yeah she needs some! She went thru three months of hell, attacks, shoved in lockers and such.
Not to mention the anger and rage she feeling right now.
OK, I got something to get off my chest. The Sirens
"3 months! It took you 3 fucking months to find out it was not her and you had to be told! You never tried to figure it out! You had to be told, just like how you had to be told by Princess Twilight to make up! Just like how you had to be told to make up so you could beat us! You know, if it weren't for Sunset, your school would've been ours for the taking and your magic too! But once you used her up, you tossed her away! Like every human in this place! I feel ashamed, you know. Ashamed that we were beaten by ungrateful bitches like you! Sure, we're villains, but we never turned on each other! But you turned on your own! And when the whole school was against her, you did nothing! Wait, no, one of you did do something! One of you decided to make her life miserable (RD)! Say what you want about us, but you're just proven you're even worse. You're not heroes. You're traitors."
Kind of my cruel rant.
Aaaaaaand boom goes the dynamite. I can't wait to see how Sunset, the Rainbooms, the CMC, and everyone else pick up the pieces.
She was so scared that she forgot grammar ( or it was supposed to be like that)
Why is there no update today so far
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I know I’m here dying to see why sunset tried to kill herself again and there like um nah not gonna post until last minute lol
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I'M SO SORRY, IT'S UP NOW
OK, from this chapter, Applejack learns that she can't trust family now. This is surely going to wreck her worldview because she always trusted kin, but now Applebloom betrayed her so now she can't trust family either. Applejack's problem is that she doesn't trust her friends, which is why she and Rainbow Dash had a falling out. And also why Sunset Shimmer was driven away.
Of course, the Rainboom's trust Applejack and well they back her up on Sunset being Anon-A-Miss, only to be proven wrong. Someone is going to blame each other here.
Ohana means family. Family means no one gets left behind. That is the perfect movie for this situation
How can something be so depressing and yet wholesome at the same time? Astounding.
I'm happy for you Sunset![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
This is how you should have acted Rainbow Dash! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/366213/2/hell-high-water/2-will-you-rail-against-the-dying-day
..."She hurt so many people, and all she got was a slap on the wrist and a ‘lesson in friendship"
Apparently Scoots' idea of a "slap on the wrist" is literally being blasted into a crater by an all-powerful rainbow laser.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
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Good. The lousy little louts deserve it! A girl almost DIED because of what they did, and they didnt even have a good reason. In one that I read, Apple Bloom got the switch from Granny Smith, and Scoots' dad ran over her phone, computer, and TV. That still didnt feel like enough, cuz most of the Anon-a-Miss stories all include Sunset either being physically assaulted, ceaselessly bullied, emotionally tormented, self-harming or killing herself, or all of the above. If someone made all that happen to you, would you want the people responsible to just not be able to go to Prom uwu
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If they didn't admit people would still blame sunset. You really think that if the adults say she is not guilty they will believe. They didn't have much proof before and yet sunset was pounded.
Now that there exposed I kinda want Sunset to get revenge Edmund Dantes, The Count of Monte Cristo style
I don't know, I would like to see you on the receiving end of the Elements of Harmony. Let's see if you would call it 'a slap on the wrist and a lesson in friendship'.
Awww
That last bit got me all :)