One fateful day in Ponyville, a series of events transpires which leaves Scootaloo believing that her friends have left her, and the truth about her dark past comes out. Will she make the right choice?
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- Member Since 22nd Jul, 2012
- offline last seen Nov 22nd, 2012
Always 777
Hi there. You can call me Grayson. I am a furry teenage boy who doesn't have many friends. Im kind of a nerd about games and movies and such, play xbox 360 for fun, and the Gears Of War series as well as Skyrim are my favorite games. I love listiening to and playing music, it keeps me alive. Doctor Who is my favorite TV show and I also love coca-cola. My favorite bands are The Beatles, Pink Floyd, and Queen, but i also like Metallica. Im semi depressed, but music, writing, and drawing keep me going. I am in love with my soulmate, I am a great singer, but nobody ever wants to listen. That's about it.
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This was a good story. Short, but solid. I like it. Keep up the great work!
Thank you very much! By the way, if your user name is a reference to Fallout: New Vegas, I approve.
All in all, a good read. my only say in this is that the pacing seems really rushed, but that can be put towards it being such a short story.
It seemed much longer in MS word, my next will be much longer. But yes, i was keeping pace up with the length, trying to not let it get boring in the short amount of actual story.
I love twists in stories, I had to put one myself. Thank you!
twas pretty good story, i like. Albeit i was never one for last second rescues, and everything about one's past being explained at one single point in the story, it was still good story. This story has alot of great ideas, and if it were paced a bit more and a tad longer it would be perfect, but it still was a great read.
Your residential Scootaloo idolist and/or crazy fanatic
-Spiffy Mcsquee
Thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind for the next story.
interesting start and end of the 1st chapter, color me impressed