8933962 I thought it was end with on a note that the fucked not them atoully fucking tho I do belive you might have to change the rating to M because of that
I have to be honest here. The plot for this story is adequate for a positive take but the grammatical mistakes that are made throughout the story makes me not want to read it anymore. I advise the author to seek editorial help from someone.
Not bad at all. HOnestly, i think the potion brought out her feelings for him. That's what i think
Might want to bump it up to Rated M.
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done
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I think you may be right
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Glad you think so.
boy that escilated quickly
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just like everything else I write.
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I thought it was end with on a note that the fucked not them atoully fucking tho I do belive you might have to change the rating to M because of that
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I did
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well the good news is you can now go into more detail with the story now
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yup.
I need some professional help with the next chapter.
............... well now................... that escalated quickly.
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new icon nice
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thank you.
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welcome
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i Fixed the chapter name at least
I have to be honest here. The plot for this story is adequate for a positive take but the grammatical mistakes that are made throughout the story makes me not want to read it anymore. I advise the author to seek editorial help from someone.
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I have tried this before, they never contact me again after the first chapter.
is this getting updated???
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yes, I'm just having trouble writing a sex scene that isn't terrible.
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............... oh.
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so sorry, but I am working on it
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that's good.
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Don't worry, he's got one.
Me.
And I'm here to stay.
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It's nice to know that my stories are becoming more and more readable thanks to you