veamos si logre entender bien esta historia... twilight y starlight crean una potente pocima de amor para X motivo, pero por un error de la alicornio pierde la botella que cae en las mano de rainbow dash. y ella selo entrega a spitfire. que ella lo bebe justo en frente de spike y cae enamorada de el... bien, por el momento te tomo bastante poder entender tu escritura, en serio hombre me ha costado mucho, pero eso no quita el hecho me gusta esta historia... pero hay algunos puntos que no logro entenderlo. por ejemplo cuando bebio la botella arcoirir, su saviba se convirtio en arcoiris o no se lo tomo por completo y de compartio la bebida al dragon?
let's see if I can understand this story well ... twilight and starlight create a potent love potion for X motive, but because of an error the alicorn loses the bottle that falls into rainbow dash's hand. and she selo delivers to spitfire. that she drinks it right in front of spike and falls in love with him ... well, for the moment I take quite enough to understand your writing, seriously man has cost me a lot, but that does not take away the fact I like this story... but there are some points that I can not understand. for example, when he drank the rainbow bottle, did his saviba become a rainbow or did he take it completely and share the drink with the dragon?
saludos y espero que aclares mis dudas y que subas el próximo cap... Greetings and I hope that you clarify my doubts and that you upload the next cap...
Potion worn off what's going to happen next?
YAY new chapter! Also doesn't Spike have a little bit of the potion in him from the fries?
Happy Birthday! Hope you have an awesome day.
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yeah, but Spitfire was drugged in the morning, and Spike later at night, don't worry Spike will be freed too.
I wonder if this is a prequel to the drunk love series
nice job i love it man
veamos si logre entender bien esta historia... twilight y starlight crean una potente pocima de amor para X motivo, pero por un error de la alicornio pierde la botella que cae en las mano de rainbow dash. y ella selo entrega a spitfire. que ella lo bebe justo en frente de spike y cae enamorada de el...
bien, por el momento te tomo bastante poder entender tu escritura, en serio hombre me ha costado mucho, pero eso no quita el hecho me gusta esta historia... pero hay algunos puntos que no logro entenderlo. por ejemplo cuando bebio la botella arcoirir, su saviba se convirtio en arcoiris o no se lo tomo por completo y de compartio la bebida al dragon?
let's see if I can understand this story well ... twilight and starlight create a potent love potion for X motive, but because of an error the alicorn loses the bottle that falls into rainbow dash's hand. and she selo delivers to spitfire. that she drinks it right in front of spike and falls in love with him ...
well, for the moment I take quite enough to understand your writing, seriously man has cost me a lot, but that does not take away the fact I like this story... but there are some points that I can not understand. for example, when he drank the rainbow bottle, did his saviba become a rainbow or did he take it completely and share the drink with the dragon?
saludos y espero que aclares mis dudas y que subas el próximo cap...
Greetings and I hope that you clarify my doubts and that you upload the next cap...
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the saliva became the rainbow
When will the next chapter come out
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maybe a month, or maybe tomorrow, literally just depends on when I find a good ending to the chapter.
Ok I believe in you
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Ok maybe a bit longer than a Month
Well, at least it seemed to serve its purpose properly.
Next chapter please?