Holy was NOT expecting that, that was awesome omc I just got the fastest adrenaline rush I've ever had in my life (God I hate being so emotionally attached to stuff I like) awesome chapter can't wait for more keep up the excellent work!
Personally I think Spike should have been the one to kick their flanks, I mean it was just a snob and two goons, I don't care if they have magic he's a dragon he should have been able to take them.
Holy was NOT expecting that, that was awesome omc I just got the fastest adrenaline rush I've ever had in my life (God I hate being so emotionally attached to stuff I like) awesome chapter can't wait for more keep up the excellent work!
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I was improving this entire chapter.
Holy hell!!! This got epic quick!!!!
Cant wait for more.
A very good read, keep it up!
Glad that Momlestia didn't hear wind of this.
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Well, no wonder.
Please say there is going to be m rated stand alone chapter
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yea, near the end.
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yeah, I don't think mobsters are ready for the moon
Personally I think Spike should have been the one to kick their flanks, I mean it was just a snob and two goons, I don't care if they have magic he's a dragon he should have been able to take them.
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Hey I've actually read that story! It was awesome
Personally I think it mightve been better without the mobsters, but it's still good
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well, this chapter is kinda filler, so your welcome to skip the chapter, won't hurt my feelings.