• Member Since 26th Feb, 2016
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jebinnam


Christian, male, was brought to MLP by the awesomeness of Brony culture. FIM Literature connoisseur-wannabe?

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It is the year 943, in a small town in Coastal Equestria. In the home of some of the wealthiest ponies in the land, a small middle-class foal runs from home. Yet her path will tie with the long journey of an old mare, if just for one warm summer night.


This is my first fimfiction story, and part of a really large storyworld I have been working on. This is me testing the waters. If you likey, lemme know what plz. If you don't, PLZ say why.
Or just enjoy reading it. (And visit my page for some of my favorite if ur stuck)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

So I all really got was the Twilight was being a f***ing coward and ran away from everything. She may say it differently, but that's what it is.

But not much else.

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Hmmm... you know, you're actually right. And she'd know it, too (but she couldn't say it that way to an impressionable foal, and definitely wouldn't swear out loud).

I just wanna know if you'd like to see why she hasn't fixed it yet.

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Oh definitely. Way too much told and not shown to leave as a one-shot. So I'm interested. Plus what else Twilight has been doing.

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