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Auryx Saturnius


Does this Unit have a soul?

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(this story is On Hiatus)

In the recent future, Equestria had barely managed to survive a catastrophic civil war and all they can do is lick their wounds and try and rebuild. But Celestia knows that what once was could never be again, and she is fully aware of hardships that will come with the newly reached Equestrian Atomic Age. Beaten down and discouraged about the fruitfulness of life, all she can do is lead a nation into the future, a future that would lead to its eventual self-destruction.

But an old friend from another world comes to Equestria with a hope to fix everything and Celestia finds herself conflicted over the decision of either saving her world, or preventing herself from breaking one of the most powerful and influential laws of all time and space. It's up to her to try and fix Celestia once envied splendor, re-teach her the value and wonder of life in a world growing up and reunite her with her sister, Luna, by showing the wisdom of one of the mightiest legends that neither party can simply ignore.

The clock is ticking and time is beginning to run out before it becomes too late.
Can she fix the problems of a fractured Equestria? Will Celestia and Luna be able to put aside their differences once again? Or will everything crumble into the dust and explode in a nuclear cloud?

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Comments ( 13 )

Ever so slightly confusing, although seems like a good story. I shall watch with anticipation. :trixieshiftright:

Wow. That description alone got me intruiged. Time to read!

After reading: :heart:

Bloody hell...
moar chapters plawx :pinkiehappy:

Curious, especially with that cute human Luna.

I suggest you set it to Haitus if you plan to return. If you are unsure, then leave it on Cancel. If not, Cancel.

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...but when I do come back, it will be pretty different

1904129 Yeah, so? I did the same thing with He Who Loves Nightmares, though it is still the same basis. The big thing is that you can't make a different story post for the new version; FiMFiction doesn't allow that. So, Completed or On Hiatus.

1904129 The same thing is likely to happen with my story Fallout: Equestria - Loyalty Lost; it's quite lame right now, and so I'm likely to rewrite it ENTIRELY to make it a WHOLE lot better. That means that I will come back to it and all, even though the current version will be gone. It happens a lot.

I am intrigued. And that is saying something seeing as this is an unusual crossover between Halo and Equestria.

If you come back to this, and you need help, I'd be glad to provide it, bytheway.

1982443 SciFi ponies has some very intriguing ways it can go. Then again, its ways I would love for normal SciFi. But, pulling the normal for today wouldn't cut it when it involves ponies; I expect better than that. SciFi is meant to be fresh, not average.

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