Deep inside the Everfree Forest, there stands an enormous mountain which many creatures, like the ponies of Equestria, very seldom tread. The is because, deep inside the mountain there is a city made up of several different types of crystals. This is the home of the proud Diamond Dogs and most importantly the queen of all Diamond Dogs Fenriss.
Fenriss is considered by many in her kingdom to be the most beautiful, “partially because of her Golden fur”, and wise female in the entire pack. Her subjects often praise her for how strong and gracious she always acts,but unbeknown to them Fenriss held a deep sorrow in her heart.
You see,for as long as she could remember,Fenriss had longed for a pup for her to call her own. However,due to her obligations to her subjects,she had never been able to find a mate with which to have a pup. So for the sake of her kingdom and subjects,she decided to bury her desire deep down in her heart. That was,until one fateful day when everything changed.
As Fenriss sat on her throne, looking out at her kingdom, she sighed and said, ”Look at them down there.” She looked at all the families that thrived in her kingdom and said, ”What I wouldn’t give to have what they have.” Fenriss then let out one last sigh before a knocking could be heard from the giant diamond door which served as the entrance to the throne room.
Fenriss looked at the door and ,in a calm voice, said, ”Enter.” Upon saying this the doors slowly started to open and a German Shepard Diamond Dog clad in armor made of iron and adorned in rubies entered. Fenriss groaned as she slightly lowered her head and asked, ”What is it now Commander Howler, is it another messenger from the ponies about those three Omegas that kidnapped that pony?”
Commander Howler shook his head and said, ”No majesty, it not the ponies again. ”Fenriss raised her eyebrow and asked, ”Then what is it?” Commander Howler shook his head and said, ”Majesty come and see for self.” Commander Howler then started to walk out of the room not knowing if Fenriss was following.
Fenriss looked at Commander Howler and wondered what was so important that it needed her attention. So She decided to follow commander Howler to the outside of their mountain home.
Fenriss looked around and asked, ”Alright Commander Howler where is this thing that you deemed so important that I needed to follow you. ”Right as Commander Howler was about to say something a loud crying could be heard from within the forest.
Fenriss looked out into the forest trying to pinpoint the location of the crying. She then started to run into the forest all the while feeling her motherly instincts kick in as the crying grew louder and louder until finally, she came to the source of the crying.
What she saw was a clearing in the forest which had a small pile of cloth that seemed to move ever so slightly.
Fenriss walked up to the pile of cloth and softly poked it with her paw which caused the cloth to move. She shot her paw back in fear at this, but after she had managed to calm herself she decided to pull at the cloth and see what was making it move. Once she had moved the cloth, away she was greeted by the sight of a tiny human baby boy.
Fenriss had no idea what this creature was, so she decided to lean down and sniff him. As she sniffed the small boy, he began to laugh happily because of her nose tickling him. Fenriss raised her head and just smiled at the precious little thing she saw before her.
As the two looked at each other for a bit Fenriss could feel that empty feeling, that pup sized hole she had, slowly starting to fill. She tried to reach down so she might hold the small child. However, as she was about to pick him up Commander Howler yelled, ”Majesty! Don’t touch strange thing!”
Fenriss drew back her paws and turned her attention to the Commander and asked, “Oh Commander Howler whatever are you on about, why should I not touch this little gem?”
Commander Howler walked over to Fenriss and said, ”We not know what little creature is or if it dangerous.” Fenriss rolled her eyes and said, ”Commander Howler while I commend you on your dedication, I must say that you have nothing to worry about. ”She then leaned down and carefully picked the baby up, causing him to smile happily, and showed him to Commander Howler. She then asked, ”Does this cute little thing really look that dangerous?”
Commander Howler sighed and said, ”No but never be too safe.” He then looked at the baby one last time before saying, ”Majesty should get back.”
Fenriss smiled and said, ”Yes we should Commander Howler.” She then looked down at the baby and started to gently tickle him while saying, ”Time for you to see your new home little one.” The baby laughed gleefully at the tickling and snuggled deep into Fenriss, causing her to smile brightly.
As they walked back to her gem palace, Fenriss couldn’t help but notice all her subjects staring at her and the small baby she carried in her arms. Once they reached her gem palace Fenriss said, ”Alright Commander you are dismissed for the day.”
Commander Howler gave Fenriss a bow and walked away from her. Once Fenriss was alone she said, ”Alright little one let me show you around your new home.” Fenriss smiled as she started to show the baby around every inch of her gem palace. Along their tour of the castle, a Rough Collie looking maid by the name of Lassie walked up to them and asked, ”Your Majesty is that a little one in your arms?”
Fenriss smiled and showed the baby to Lassie and said, ”Oh yes it is, I found him outside the mountain and decided to take him in as my own.”
Lassie leaned in to get a better look at the baby but was surprised when he touched her face and giggled. Fenriss chuckled at this and said, ”Looks like he likes you.”
Lassie chuckled as she slowly pulled away from him and asked, ”So what is his name?” Fenriss blinked a couple of times before lowering her gaze at the baby and saying, ”I haven’t given him one yet.”
Lassie looked at Fenriss and asked, ”Then why not give the little one a name now?” Fenriss looked at Lassie and then back to the baby in her arms and said, ”I think I will name him Kiba, after the first king of our pack, Kiba the Vicious.” She then nuzzled Kiba and asked, ”How does that sound my little gem.” Kiba just smiled and giggled as he nuzzled her back.
Lassie chuckled at the sight of the two and said, ”You two sure are cute Your Majesty.” Lassie then said, ”Well if you will excuse me I must return to my duties.” She turned around and was about to leave when Fenriss said, ”Wait! Miss Lassie, I have a request to ask of you.”
Lassie turned back around and asked, ”How might I be of service Your Majesty?” Fenriss smiled and said, ”As you know I can be quite busy dealing with the kingdom and all of our mines.” Lassie gave a quick nod and Fenriss continued, ”So I was wondering if you would be willing to become Kiba’s nanny?”
Lassie smiled widely and said, ”Oh I would love to become Kiba’s nanny.” Fenriss smiled at this and said, ”Good, come by my room tomorrow to start your new job.” Lassie gave a quick nod and was about to say something, but was cut off by a loud yawn from Kiba.
Fenriss and Lassie smiled at this and Fenriss said, ”Looks like my little gem is ready for bed.” She walked past Lassie and said, ”Remember to come by in the morning for your first day.”
Lassie gave a quick nod and said, ”Yes Your Majesty, see you too in the morning.” Lassie then walked away.
After a couple of minutes, Fenriss and Kiba reached Fenriss’ bedchamber, which consisted of a large circular bed in the center of the room. She walked over to the bed and softly laid Kiba down on before climbed in next to him. As soon as she did this Kiba, snuggled up to her causing her to smile happily.
Fenriss kissed the top of his head and said, ”At last I have a pup to call my own, and I swear upon my life that I will be the best mother in the world.” Fenriss held Kiba close to her, and the two fell into a deep sleep.
Good story so far
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thank you
Question the next chapter will deal with the time skip or will continue immediately after? Also I wonder what the nobles will think about a prince
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the next chapter will not skip. And you will see that in the chapter.
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Your welcome
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Great, lets hope that other species think humans are dangerous and tell the queen that she needs to dispose of him or try to take it away out of fear
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yeah, hey did you see this story was, and hopefully still is, in the opular section.
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what's opular?
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Sorry I meant popular.
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Ah…hey would you look at that, congrats man
I hope that his mother isn't the "I have not every a few hours of freetime per day kind of ruler, because I want to see her spending some time now and then with her child.
I like where this is going, what type of dog is his mother?, since it looked like you made his nanny the (tv lassie) collie dog. I actually like it that more started to make the diamond dogs look like better dogs than those more or less ugly once that where used in the show. I just didn't liked their look so much.
Well thank you for this interessting story, not sure what you want to cover with this story, but I always hope for the possibility of sequels and I like to see him finding friends and such things without it happening in timeskips.
Long story short, I hate it when it goes like this.
1. young boy getting adopted
2. timeskip
3. suddenly having friends, knowing all the rulers and main chars of the world and having the best mother son bond
I like it that there is also the chance that he isn't going to be that much different from the dogs.
If they creat him some tools he could probably be as efficient as them and maybe having a crafty way to outclass them.
I always say I don't need my main chars to be op, but I like it if they manage to impress characters like Celestia and others.
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Not sure what he meant exactly but I would be against that usual "oh no we need to kidnap and kill him" kind of thing happening or "every" species disliking the human.
What I would prefer is if they maybe have or get some allies like the ponies or griffons, minotaurs?, (not sure who would be their friends), but like I said, the half of Equestria against the other kind of war.
Long story short I would prefer only some of them to be against it instead of the usual let's kill him while she is not looking kind of thing. It would be already enough if some diamond dogs would not accept him to creat some kind of tension, it doesn't always needs to be assasination or "the world" against the human baby.
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okay first I would like to say the no not everyone will be out for him and none of them would be gunning for him. They would mostly just be a bit cautious when it comes to him. However that is not to say a few of them might bully him in some way.
As for the rest of the questions well yes she will be able to have a good amount of time with Kiba, but will at times have to be away from him due to her position. Fenriss is a Golden Retriever because that is my favorite dog bread.
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Well as far as I understand it, it sounds good what you had to say.
A rough collie named Lassie? Will there be other diamond dogs named after famous dogs?
I have to admit that speaking as a person of Norse descent that's heard the myths since childhood...
Well, the noble Queen Fenris sounds a bit odd in my ears, must admit. Like somebody retelling the tale of Jesus, daughter of God, mother of modern Christianity.
Not that there's anything wrong with that type of retelling (and about the only mythical canine that's female I can think of is the unnamed she-wolf that nursed Romulus & Remus, so not exactly a glut of meaningful choices), but still. Bit odd.
Just thought I'd mention that the thought came over me.
I know I've only started and I will continue. But I got one recommendation.
This is a good story and its interesting, but you need editors. I can surmise that English isn't your first language and I'm not demeaning that. I'm just saying you can articulate this story better if you have some help because it can be hard for some to read the chapters.
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I am sorry if you had a hard time reading the chapter, and would like to thank you for your suggestion. But I would like to note one thing, English is my first language. The reason it might seem like I it is not is because I have a learning disability, which i rather not say, that makes writing harder for me. Again I am sorry if I made it hard for you to read at times and promise to do better. And just so I am clear I am not saying this to be rude I am legitimately thanking you for your advice, just wanting to be clear on that.
Awe....
Ok that’s so sweet.