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Misery, Misery, Misery301 stories ·316 members

Panic

When Rainbow Dash comes within breathing distance of her dream, she crumbles under pressure.

She panics.

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Ponaygurl

Ponaygurl #1 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · ·

Wow...

fallen starr

fallen starr #2 · Jul 22nd, 2012 · · ·

I don't know what to say...is she dead? Then how is she crying on the cloud talking to her friends? I just...don't know. Why was everypony so mean? I can't see her friends saying anything like that.

I just dont know...I did like it. I was really good. Really really good. I'm just lost at what else to really say.

BeThereWhenever

BeThereWhenever #3 · Jul 22nd, 2012 · · ·

948763 Thank you very much for the comment, I'm glad to see the story had such an impact on you! As for your confusion, the story is meant to be left to the interpretation of the reader as it can be understood in several different ways, so explaining them all here may ruin the experience for any other possible readers.

Thanks again for reading!

Rhyooski

Rhyooski #4 · Feb 25th, 2013 · · ·

I am absolutely blown away. I don't even know what to say it was so amazing my mind is blown!

solsticebrony888

solsticebrony888 #5 · Feb 26th, 2013 · · ·

Great story, but the usage of "buck" as a cuss word constantly ruined the mood for me. I can't see her saying that, just like I can't see someone in real life using "kick" in place of "fuck". Just use "fuck" next time, lol. Great story though

BeThereWhenever

BeThereWhenever #6 · Feb 26th, 2013 · · ·

2180971 Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the story otherwise! Many people have said that ponies using real swears takes them out of the action because they feel it is out of character for the ponies, or that the land of Equestria would have no real swears. I'm sorry it hampered your immersion, but this is a classic case "you can't please everyone" I'm afraid.