Spike has been hung up on Fluttershy for a long time, but he's worried that if he gives in to his lust he'll only hurt her. Maybe the sexy, fluffy pegasus isn't as timid as he thought?
So Spike you got lucky with Fluttershy! How'd you know? You're walking funny! So you noticed, as I got lucky with Fluttershy . . .Discord got 'lucky' with my ass.
This is very interesting to say the least. Shy has a far more interesting side she has yet to show Spike until recently and I wonder how he will handle it. One thing I just can't help but wonder is.... who else have seen this side. I find it interesting that when Spike tried to confess his feeling, not of only just lust but also of wanting to be with her she shut him down in favor of just acting on lust. Which makes me wonder if this is more of lust for her or if there are really feelings in this. I mean Shy has always come off as the free spirit one of the group even with her shy nature. So it wouldn't be hard to see her as a free love kinda gal. And if that is the case how will Spike feel finding that out about Shy? There are so many interesting things yet to come from this story and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
8692148 A relationship between two doms can be a very interesting affair. Though, I'd figure both of them to be more like switches than doms in this case.
8692257 Oops, my bad! How I misread "incomplete" is beyond me XD I'm glad it's not over though, because things were just heating up between our two now-in-the-open lovebirds. ^-^ You can bet I'll be keeping my eyes peeled for what's to come!
causing it to beat in excitement as it stiffened even more in her hand,
hoof*
it had been that was before she even touched him.
way*
I'm only going to let you fuck me like a little bitch if you can earn it," Fluttershy grinned, lust in her eyes. "Also, ask first.
Well I'm glad Spike enjoys it. I honestly hate when people do this: challenge you but tell you you're doing it wrong. No. You want me? You get *me*—not the version of me that lets you pull all the strings. It's give and take, so give, if you want to take.
Reaching lower and lower, she eventually wrapped a hoof around Spike's dick, running it along from the base to the tip and feeling every part of his smooth endowment before giving it a gentle little pump, causing it to beat in excitement as it stiffened even more in her hand, as if desperate for release as Spike began to pant.
The conversation with Twilight had helped in giving him confidence, but handling a situation this delicate with a mare so fragile had to be done carefully; even if he had a plan, it didn't mean that the execution would automatically be smooth and that everything would work out just how he wanted.
Good man, Spike. Remembering rule number one of both love and war: NO PLAN SURVIVES FIRST CONTACT WITH THE ENEMY.
Unable to resist temptation, he reached out a guilty hand to grab at Fluttershy's mane, cutting through the teasing and forcing her to the action, but Fluttershy batted him away with a stern look, her eyes becoming incredibly hard as she bore into him for a solid three seconds, making him falter as his chest fluttered. Before he even knew what had happened, he saw the happy little buzz of Fluttershy's wings as she continued to work her way down. How had she done that?
HOLY SHITE. Is...is she...?
It wasn't long until he caught her eyes. It was like when she had stared at him before, but the feeling was intensified as if she was angry, and it completely threw Spike. Out of a mix of impulse and shock, he lost his grip on Fluttershy's head and she instantly pulled herself away from him, his cock exiting her mouth wet and slippery as she leapt back up onto the sofa with a small flap of her wings, bringing her face close to his. "That isn't nice behaviour!" Fluttershy asserted, accosting him with a soft hoof poking into his chest, making Spike feel half of his size even as his needy cock continued to throb.
SHE IS! SHE'S USING THE MUTHABUCKIN' STARE! HA HA!
"That I'm not as fragile as you think and I'm only going to let you fuck me like a little bitch if you can earn it," Fluttershy grinned, lust in her eyes. It was almost like she was another mare, but Spike found new exhilaration at the words as if he was being offered the world on a platter, if only he could take his time with it. "Also, ask first. I'm going to guide you through this, and that starts at talking." ... ... Fluttershy shook her head, grabbing his arm and placing it between her hooves as she approached him once more. "Spike?" "Yes?" The sincerity in her next words was so powerful, so true, it could have rallied the cries of a thousand or moved the hearts of many more. "Just hurry up and ask me if you can fuck me."
To quote another fic I read (Can't remember exactly which one): I felt a disturbance in the jimmies. It's as if thousands were ruffled at once, and were suddenly silenced. You have gotten my jimmies all rustled and shite. I am tracking this so hard.
He wanted to see her. He wanted to talk to her. He wanted to fuck her.
Sounds like a plan.
"Okay, let's see if we can kick this up a notch," Fluttershy smirked
: "I'm in!"
"...alright," Spike sighed, his hands clenched tight. "What's the understanding?" "That I'm not as fragile as you think and I'm only going to let you fuck me like a little bitch if you can earn it," Fluttershy grinned, lust in her eyes.
: *grins* "Consensual fucking, just how I like it!"
8691996 Damn, you are right! (Quick, check the window! She might be watching.)
This was a fun read; the idea of Fluttershy requiring him to earn dominance, plus that abrupt coarse language at the end. I hope you keep going with this :)
i got to say finding this interesting, liking the hole shy/spike whos incharge thing, looking forward to seeing where this is going & whos going to win lol thanks
It wasn't long until he caught her eyes. It was like when she had stared at him before, but the feeling was intensified as if she was angry, and it completely threw Spike. Out of a mix of impulse and shock, he lost his grip on Fluttershy's head and she instantly pulled herself away from him, his cock exiting her mouth wet and slippery as she leapt back up onto the sofa with a small flap of her wings, bringing her face close to his. "That isn't nice behaviour!" Fluttershy asserted, accosting him with a soft hoof poking into his chest, making Spike feel half of his size even as his needy cock continued to throb.
Uh-oh, she's un the STARE!!!
"It means you don't want me to do that?" Spike attempted, a small snarl on his face at the interrupted action. He could feel his baser instincts still flowing inside him, but something about the way the Fluttershy told him off inexplicably calmed them.
"Exactly." Fluttershy nodded, a small smile on her lips as her scolding tone was forgotten for a more compassionate one. "Now, I know being a dragon, your urges are probably telling you to go wild, forget restraint and make me subservient to you, but that isn't going to happen. If you want this to continue there needs to be an understanding between us, okay?"
Very important.
"Alright," Spike said, scratching his head. "I suppose what I'd want to ask is, well... I've had feelings for you for a long time, all sorts of feelings, and they're kinda difficult for me to articulate, but they're the sort of things that make me act like I just did, make me want to have something right then and there. Because I wanna have you, Fluttershy, and—"
Eenope, that wasn't it.
Fluttershy shook her head, grabbing his arm and placing it between her hooves as she approached him once more. "Spike?"
"Yes?"
The sincerity in her next words was so powerful, so true, it could have rallied the cries of a thousand or moved the hearts of many more. "Just hurry up and ask me if you can fuck me."
"Okay, let's see if we can kick this up a notch," Fluttershy smirked, .
Rainbow took over for a sec?
[ edit: I just remembered where I heard this line. 3:04 https://youtu.be/LMnIPxtM_Mc I'm not a hundred percent sure of it's was lifted from the show or not, but the phrasing sure sounds Rainbow ]
If you set up spike to be ""the bad boy"" just let him be the bad boy. No reason to feel bad if she s asking for it!
"I'm bad, and that's good. I will never be good, and that's not bad. There's no one I'd rather be than me."
No reason to break character so it doesn't "might perhaps somehow" comes off as mean spirited (because/if men leads the first step?), just because there was no spelled out consent (right away)? Not like we had a hundred signs... and clearly joy be shown upon shifting the relationship... Etc. leading up to it.
Sadly I see that happening often... So not just here with you :(
... which is odd, having done so well to keep it subtle and... A very fun guessing game until now! Its all set up! Just use it! Be brave and pull trough :)
I know you can! ...
Perhaps change just remove the line? At least that's my humble opinion because it just stuck out so much. Hope I explained it well
This was so in character and very well crafted and yet...I don't know. Does Shy seem like to type to take charge? I need to write a story with her. She's my favorite of the six.
So Spike you got lucky with Fluttershy!
How'd you know?
You're walking funny!
So you noticed, as I got lucky with Fluttershy . . .Discord got 'lucky' with my ass.
He said he was butting in...
Discord how could you? HE'S MINE!
Okay, who is the true horny needy beast here?
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Twilight.
This is very interesting to say the least. Shy has a far more interesting side she has yet to show Spike until recently and I wonder how he will handle it. One thing I just can't help but wonder is.... who else have seen this side. I find it interesting that when Spike tried to confess his feeling, not of only just lust but also of wanting to be with her she shut him down in favor of just acting on lust. Which makes me wonder if this is more of lust for her or if there are really feelings in this. I mean Shy has always come off as the free spirit one of the group even with her shy nature. So it wouldn't be hard to see her as a free love kinda gal. And if that is the case how will Spike feel finding that out about Shy? There are so many interesting things yet to come from this story and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
So are both of them doms? That funny as hell.
Clop with a plot- I enjoyed it! I was glad to see the final chapter posted, which I read right away.
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Not final! There's still another chapter and an epilogue to come, and that's just in the first instalment. Glad you enjoyed it though!
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A relationship between two doms can be a very interesting affair. Though, I'd figure both of them to be more like switches than doms in this case.
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Oops, my bad! How I misread "incomplete" is beyond me XD I'm glad it's not over though, because things were just heating up between our two now-in-the-open lovebirds. ^-^ You can bet I'll be keeping my eyes peeled for what's to come!
Enjoyable so far!
Note that in two places you say Spike has a hoof. He doesn't. Dragons have 2 hands and 2 feet.
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Me and my silly mistakes. Thank you very much, fixed!
Ever wonder what Spike does in his visits in Canterlot?
I must have more
hoof*
way*
Well I'm glad Spike enjoys it. I honestly hate when people do this: challenge you but tell you you're doing it wrong. No. You want me? You get *me*—not the version of me that lets you pull all the strings. It's give and take, so give, if you want to take.
Good gods, she's mutating!
Good man, Spike. Remembering rule number one of both love and war: NO PLAN SURVIVES FIRST CONTACT WITH THE ENEMY.
HOLY SHITE. Is...is she...?
SHE IS! SHE'S USING THE MUTHABUCKIN' STARE! HA HA!
To quote another fic I read (Can't remember exactly which one): I felt a disturbance in the jimmies. It's as if thousands were ruffled at once, and were suddenly silenced.
You have gotten my jimmies all rustled and shite. I am tracking this so hard.
You're in dangerous territory, vagblocking me with that cliffhanger...
... and I'm loving it.
Sounds like a plan.
: "I'm in!"
: *grins* "Consensual fucking, just how I like it!"
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Damn, you are right!
(Quick, check the window! She might be watching.)
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Really enjoyable and interesting too read can't wait for the next chapter
This was a fun read; the idea of Fluttershy requiring him to earn dominance, plus that abrupt coarse language at the end. I hope you keep going with this :)
i got to say finding this interesting, liking the hole shy/spike whos incharge thing, looking forward to seeing where this is going & whos going to win lol thanks
Go SLUTERSHY.
All he had to do was ask?!?!?!!
Should be her hoof.
I'm loving this story. Gonna read the last chapter in a bit.
I love how she interrupts his rambling with
"Are you going to ask me or not?"
Uh-oh, she's un the STARE!!!
Very important.
Eenope, that wasn't it.
My sides!!!
Rainbow took over for a sec?
[ edit: I just remembered where I heard this line. 3:04 https://youtu.be/LMnIPxtM_Mc
I'm not a hundred percent sure of it's was lifted from the show or not, but the phrasing sure sounds Rainbow ]
If you set up spike to be ""the bad boy"" just let him be the bad boy. No reason to feel bad if she s asking for it!
"I'm bad, and that's good. I will never be good, and that's not bad. There's no one I'd rather be than me."
No reason to break character so it doesn't "might perhaps somehow" comes off as mean spirited (because/if men leads the first step?), just because there was no spelled out consent (right away)?
Not like we had a hundred signs... and clearly joy be shown upon shifting the relationship... Etc. leading up to it.
Sadly I see that happening often... So not just here with you :(
... which is odd, having done so well to keep it subtle and... A very fun guessing game until now! Its all set up! Just use it! Be brave and pull trough :)
I know you can!
...
Perhaps change just remove the line?
At least that's my humble opinion because it just stuck out so much. Hope I explained it well
This was so in character and very well crafted and yet...I don't know. Does Shy seem like to type to take charge? I need to write a story with her. She's my favorite of the six.
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The quiet ones are quite often, though not always, assertive in bed.