Sometimes problems cannot be solved through conventional means. Sometimes two people with a problem must think outside of the box. Sometimes thinking outside of the box means having sex with a person that you don't very much care for. Many times.
One has to appreciate how expertly this story is woven. I came for shameless clop and slapstick humor and stayed for deep believable characters and character interaction, hooked for the next catch Little big pony throws our way. Great story!
I came here for the promise of clop, but it's chapters like this one right here that truly make me stick around. Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, that was pretty amazing š
"No Sweetie Bell you got it all wrong you seeā¦Atticus try to prank me by giving me a spice cookie, that is why I was so red" Rarity try to play it off
I can't believe you'd post this kind of SMUT on this wholesome family website! Handholding and kissing, my god what next SNUGGLES!?! i.imgur.com/FTT7sNN.jpg Seriously go on, I need more of this, it's so damn good.
I'm not gonna lie I didn't expect how good this fic was gonna be! Its really hard for me to find a fic that has smut but is more than just smut. This fic is entertaining, enjoyable, and has used a few aspects that I rarely see used in smut fics. Its really entertaining for me watching two characters go at it because in the end they love to hate each other but more than that they love to love each other even more. I've read a few of your fics and what can I say I should've expected this from the beginning because I love your earlier human poner fics but I feel as if your rapidly growing in your abilities at a rate your readers can all see and I love that. I can't wait to see more
Ok, that was amazing. The story has been really good so far, but that scene just took it to the next level. Keep it up!
Relationship chicken: Keep complimenting each other as you go in for the kiss, who ever turns their head is a pussy.
YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!
*Pumps a hoof in the air*
I knew it!!!
And they thought being caught hand holding was the worst
OH MY GOSH IM SCREAMING IN GLEE!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!
Ohhhhh! This is a massive development! My exact wishes last chapter were granted! This chapter was so good. Thank you! I
GOD DAAMN IT, must... resist screaming like a little girl....
not resisting well.....
Forget the cookies, box these two up instead they are just too sweet.
One has to appreciate how expertly this story is woven. I came for shameless clop and slapstick humor and stayed for deep believable characters and character interaction, hooked for the next catch Little big pony throws our way. Great story!
Lovely, lovely story! The writing flows very nicely too.
Spotted a couple of errors:
"Atticus said, dropping bits into her outstretched."
Outstretched hoof, perhaps?
"He waited her horn to spark to life"
Waited for
"to wait with baited breath"
Bated breath
"nothing more than a shimmering mess"
shivering/quivering mess
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If I wasn't already married, this is something I would have tried with the missus had I thought of it first.
Ha! Way too cute. Nicely done.
I came here for the promise of clop, but it's chapters like this one right here that truly make me stick around. Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, that was pretty amazing š
Oh gods this was just too cute!
That was adorable! This just keeps getting better and better.
HA
Jajaja
"No Sweetie Bell you got it all wrong you seeā¦Atticus try to prank me by giving me a spice cookie, that is why I was so red" Rarity try to play it off
Now it is only a matter of time before they direct their old aggressions at all those who tease them.
Truly this is the start of the most amazing villain duo.
My heart! It burns with the passion of a thousand suns!
That compliment war was the most adorably mushy thing I've read in long while. I wish I could give this more likes.
I have to say this is by far the lewdest chapter so far.
Next day in News: "Local guards found a body of young unicorn...."
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Lewd.
I can't believe you'd post this kind of SMUT on this wholesome family website! Handholding and kissing, my god what next SNUGGLES!?!
i.imgur.com/FTT7sNN.jpg
Seriously go on, I need more of this, it's so damn good.
I'm not gonna lie I didn't expect how good this fic was gonna be! Its really hard for me to find a fic that has smut but is more than just smut. This fic is entertaining, enjoyable, and has used a few aspects that I rarely see used in smut fics. Its really entertaining for me watching two characters go at it because in the end they love to hate each other but more than that they love to love each other even more. I've read a few of your fics and what can I say I should've expected this from the beginning because I love your earlier human poner fics but I feel as if your rapidly growing in your abilities at a rate your readers can all see and I love that. I can't wait to see more
BLUSH-OFF
ROUND ONE, FIGHT
bated breath. Unless their breath smells of minnows or something.
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i'm sure it does smell like low tide
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Atticus and rarity in a nutshell.
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Heh.
Came for the clop. Stayed for the goddamn adorable romance.
Adorable~