Oh I am so happy this is incomplete.

tiny large horse: check
human x marshmallow pone: check
rated M + sex tag: check

oh boi

Another Little big pony romance story, here we go

Will all the sex be between Rarity, Pinkie, Twilight, and the human?

I am laughing like a loon.

I need more of this!

I know what I'm looking forward to the most in this story.

The individual reactions of everypony when they find out how they got over their core hatred....

Dear God am I looking forward to Pinkie's and Twilight's reactions.

Yes, More of this, much more.

Oh, that's why you weren't binning it.
But... Atticus? Really?

Warning: Contains Horse/Human Relations. Viewer Discussion Advised

*puts on a pair of spectacles*

Hello and welcome to family book night, today I'll be discussing my new favorite smut story...

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That's me!!

i have a suspicion. I suspect that the two will slowly fall in love with each other, and PInkie and Twilight will wnt to get in on the action as well.

Aw man I loved the hell out of this. Can't wait to see more.

This is such a well written story. While the premise is almost as simple as it can get the way you’ve executed it is fabulous. I can’t wait for more!

I've come to tithe my "like" and "fav". This is going to be a wild ride.

This is going to be a glorious ride. like, fave, read later, I don't have enough buttons to hit to remind me that this should be the first thing i see when its updated.
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side note, I was listening to Madonna: Express yourself. It seemed rather appropriate for this chapter.

Another title for this story could be: Rarity & Atticus - The hate fuck chronicles.

Every so often when I see atticus I read it as atrocitus.

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oh no the safe word!

Handcuffs and a blindfold are as vanilla as she can go? Run away, Atticus! Death By Snu-Snu awaits!

“Actually, the two of us decided on sewing,” Rarity replied, ignoring the sarcasm in her friend’s tone.

Here Rarity says sewing

“Knitting?” Twilight said, unnervingly calm.

But here twilight says knitting, since I don't think Twilight is deaf that should say sewing.

“Really? After all seeing all of this shit I figured we’d just sit on the couch and hold hooves.” “Atticus…”

That "all" needs to go.

Like Rarity herself had said, there wasn’t any love between him. So, with that in mind, he held into the little mare nice and tight, took a deep breath, and leaned forward to drive his tongue as deep into her as possible.

them

“I’d appreciate it if you weren’t gentle, Atticus,” she said. “As I’ve showed you time and again, I’m not some porcelain doll. I won’t break.”

Oh shit, son. Now you have fucked up. You have entirely fucked up, now.

♠️

I love it.

Смешная история, мне нравится. Просто хотелось бы больше объема слов на 200к примерно