Sometimes problems cannot be solved through conventional means. Sometimes two people with a problem must think outside of the box. Sometimes thinking outside of the box means having sex with a person that you don't very much care for. Many times.
Bout died laughing at Twi's reaction. ALso, Rarity sitting on his lap. Gotta see fanart of that!!
While not a single pony in the bakery noticed, her horn glowed just a bit brighter. Before Atticus knew what was happening, he felt his pants being unbuttoned and unzipped. He looked down in alarm just in time to see something being teleported underneath the table.
You not only craft an awesome story that seems to have comedy and plot; but the smut is part of the plot and makes the whole story feel whole rather than the usual jarring mix it is.
I would say, Iâd honestly like a chapter or two of development on how the town is reacting, twilights reactions, etc etc. Get some story development. Then again I do like the smut. Regardless of what you write, More please!
OMG, the opening on chapter seven was absolutely hysterical. I couldn't help but visualize Purple Smart, flipping back and forth reading and rereading all five pages of that report in utter shock.
8600712 thanks for the mental image in my head. I can imagine it. She reads it, narrows her eyes, goes back to the beginning and re-reading it while muttering "What the fuck am I reading here?"
All this chapter needs to be perfect, at this point, is a little paragraph added at the end there, describing Twi's masturbatory session to those five pages... ;]
Go Rarity, I guess. I have to admit, that sort of thing takes some balls, and she owned the fuck out of it. Just... wow. And I thought I was being adventurous... :D
â No , thereâs smut. You wrote me five pages of smut!â
âPerhaps youâd only stop until that seed of yours took? Would you like that Atticus? Making love to this l-lady until sheâs carrying your foals? Making love to me until we had a h-house full of little o-ones?â
HA.
This is both arousing and absolutely hilarious at the same time. The world needs more comical smut like this.
Oh my gosh I love this story so much! This is by far the best thing I've read on this site
Oh come on, he HAD to have expected this. Love Twilight's reaction.
Bout died laughing at Twi's reaction. ALso, Rarity sitting on his lap. Gotta see fanart of that!!
Well it went sexual rather quickly now.
Nice!!
They are in love. Ah, sweet, sweet love!!
Dear lord, they're adorable.
.......Why do I feel so dirty?? Probably because I like it too much đ¨
You not only craft an awesome story that seems to have comedy and plot; but the smut is part of the plot and makes the whole story feel whole rather than the usual jarring mix it is.
I would say, Iâd honestly like a chapter or two of development on how the town is reacting, twilights reactions, etc etc. Get some story development. Then again I do like the smut. Regardless of what you write, More please!
I wait in eager anticipation for the next chapter!
This is actually a really romantic story. I'm loving this on all my shippin' levels and I am a strident Rarijack kind of man.
That was hot.
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I agree with both of you because I'm running out of things to explain how much I love this story.
OMG, the opening on chapter seven was absolutely hysterical. I couldn't help but visualize Purple Smart, flipping back and forth reading and rereading all five pages of that report in utter shock.
10 points to LittleBigPony
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God damn it, this is some magical hatefuckery and I love every piece of it.
HAHA! Twilight now knows whats going on, and has no idea how to process it, which is fun.
Also, Atticus giving Rarity a "Public" fetish is going to bite him in the ass at some point.
I mean, it already has, but when they're caught, they're both gonna hate it.
I hope its Pinkie that catches them.... Or Fluttershy and she gets a face full.
Ya know, cause he said she was attractive or something....
Don't think spoilers are needed this time.
Bwahahahahaha! Keep up the awesome work on this story! It's funny, strangely sexy, and engaging. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Ok, took two days buy I read it alll. Amazing. Keep it up!
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thanks for the mental image in my head.
I can imagine it. She reads it, narrows her eyes, goes back to the beginning and re-reading it while muttering "What the fuck am I reading here?"
So, how much longer until they get arrested, again?
didn't you already establish that rarity's stank would be on him for a month? so wouldn't the rest of the poni smell the cum?
All this chapter needs to be perfect, at this point, is a little paragraph added at the end there, describing Twi's masturbatory session to those five pages... ;]
Go Rarity, I guess. I have to admit, that sort of thing takes some balls, and she owned the fuck out of it. Just... wow. And I thought I was being adventurous... :D
Then again, there was that physics lecture...
Outright smashing ROFL
Damn, now I want a sequel with Twilight under the saddle. ;]
It's a masterpiece! We need more stories like this!
Love~