Sunset had no idea she just avoided the naughty mayham on the other side of the mirror.

I hope the next chapter won't take long. It does seem to get serious for Flash Sentry but if he wants this relationship to be successfull in the long term he would have to move to Equestria permanently.

Heh, kept expecting something extremely perverted to happen. And just how bloody long are you going to make this story?

Sugarcoat so needs more attention in the clip department.

“I like Trixie in her costume.”The medallion suddenly spoke up in a synthesized voice through a pixelated smiley face, causing its wearer toeep!and clamp both hands over it, to the laughter of all her friends. “You know, I think you did a littletoogood a job onWidgethere, Twilight…” she said, having completed the group theme by wearing a short yellow jacket over an untucked white blouse with a loose blue tie and her hair restyled and tied off a blue bow, ablack glove worn on her right hand only.

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“None taken,” Sunset responded automatically with a chuckle, content to just stand back and take in the Halloween scene, Twilight at her side as she continued to tinker with the final part of her friend’s costume. Most of the students had gathered on the school steps to have their pictures taken in costume together… both for mementos and so they could be judged as to who had the best Halloween attire by the three principals, who gotten into the spirit of the day by dressing up as well. “It’s good to see you girls again. Twilight told us all about what happened with Chrysalis before she left…” she told the two Crystal Prep girls, causing the pair to blush and exchange a slightly furtive look.

Well this sounds like an interesting story. Any chance of us hearing it?

A nice little breather chapter, tons of references to some of my favorite series and games, AND Flash getting more love?

How is it you managed to write an amazing clopfic and yet make the chapter that doesn't have any sex in it one of my favorites?! HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!

Also, you are just setting up a ton of sequels for this aren't you?

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Considering the fact that magic is leaking into this world in abundance, I think it's only a matter of time till we get more portals to the human world. In which case Flash will be able to live there and or vist on a daily basis.

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Sunset had no idea she just avoided the naughty mayham on the other side of the mirror.

For now. there's a reason she's tagged in the story, you know...

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I hope the next chapter won't take long. It does seem to get serious for Flash Sentry but if he wants this relationship to be successfull in the long term he would have to move to Equestria permanently.

Perhaps, unless cross-portal transit becomes more common as the worlds become more aware of each other and travel and trade starts between them. And at the rate magic is coming into the human world, it might not be much longer...

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Heh, kept expecting something extremely perverted to happen. And just how bloody long are you going to make this story?

Hard to say. It'll probably end up being at least double the current number of chapters before all is said and done for all I want to do with it. And sorry to disappoint, but being an interlude chapter, the point was NOT to have any sex in it to give readers a break from it and a peek in at the other side of the portal. The Canterlot High side of things remains unaffected by the curse... for now.

Sugarcoat so needs more attention in the clip department.

Yes she does!

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“I like Trixie in her costume.”The medallion suddenly spoke up in a synthesized voice through a pixelated smiley face, causing its wearer toeep!and clamp both hands over it, to the laughter of all her friends. “You know, I think you did a littletoogood a job onWidgethere, Twilight…” she said, having completed the group theme by wearing a short yellow jacket over an untucked white blouse with a loose blue tie and her hair restyled and tied off a blue bow, a black glove worn on her right hand only.

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You're welcome. I gave you a shout-out in the author's notes because you were the one who gave me the idea with one of your earlier avatars!

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“It’s good to see you girls again. Twilight told us all about what happened with Chrysalis before she left…” she told the two Crystal Prep girls, causing the pair to blush and exchange a slightly furtive look.

Well this sounds like an interesting story. Any chance of us hearing it?

See the author's notes and the end of this blog: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/811931/for-midnight-rising-readers

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A nice little breather chapter, tons of references to some of my favorite series and games, AND Flash getting more love?

Yep, think that pretty well covers it!

How is it you managed to write an amazing clopfic and yet make the chapter that doesn't have any sex in it one of my favorites?! HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!

It's my special talent! Very glad you liked! Actually, it's just my general writing philosophy that even heavily adult stories need a little down time for the reader, and this seemed like a good time for such an interlude. That, and I had this idea for this chapter in my head and it wouldn't let me go until I wrote it.

Also, you are just setting up a ton of sequels for this aren't you?

Maybe.

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Heh, I didn't catch that. Guess I should've read the author's note, huh?
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Are you going to have Celestia and Luna show up later on, by any chance?
Because, well, what can I say. I love a good Luna corruption, and not much of it exists. ;-;

As an aside, I caught your link to Aftershock, lol. The Discord / Celestia angle is almost cute, hope we see a bit more of that.

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Are you going to have Celestia and Luna show up later on, by any chance?

In a manner of speaking. No spoilers, sorry.

Because, well, what can I say. I love a good Luna corruption, and not much of it exists. ;-;

So do I!

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As an aside, I caught your link to Aftershock, lol. The Discord / Celestia angle is almost cute, hope we see a bit more of that.

I love the stuff, and cinnamon whiskey. The story's not so much about Discord / Celly, but I promise you'll see them again later.

Dare I hope Midnight Sparkle and Princess Twilight's new evil form will meet and...compete?

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You might just dare!

Are you going to do more chapters for story for this year halloween?

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https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/829750/for-october

My vote goes to Team RWBY. This Trixie has good taste!

Ironically, up to this chapter the story could have been easily adapted as a true episode of the show. After this chapter got posted, this story cemented itself as a parody of the show.

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Ironically, up to this chapter the story could have been easily adapted as a true episode of the show. After this chapter got posted, this story cemented itself as a parody of the show.

Not sure I follow, considering all the adult action in earlier chapters definitely wouldn't allow them to be made show episodes! Honestly, I could see a EqG episode made out of this chapter, at least without the innuendoes, given it's not otherwise adult at all and more slice-of-life than anything else.