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Since when did Twilight get Zecora? I can't believe our shaman would fall this quickly without a fight.
I say go for it. Show us just how naughty Zecora has become.
Thanks to Firesight for providing with with a cut of the middle of the chapter so I can examine the centerpiece scene with Zecora. I gotta say it was pretty risky using teenagers that way, but from the little bit I took a peek at it was brilliantly executed - one of the best I've ever read in the foalcon department, if a bit, ah, non-consensual. Let's see how she holds up:
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The Duskwood is real, fam.
Seriously creepy atmospheric shit. I dig it. I just hope they don't meet Stitches along the road to Zecora's house.
It just isn't the same without the all caps. Bless you, Conner!
Well you are still in your younger teenage years and Equestria is pretty innocent, Gentlemanverse aside. Once you get older you won't be able to get enough of the thestral D.
I'm going to retcon chapter 8 of Foolers Rush In to just say that. The bit about the medial ridge is too big a stretch as far as explanations go. I was just trying to convey the idea that it's not going be as harsh going in since they're a hybrid of ponies and bats as opposed to a subspecies of magically-hyperevolved horse.
Uh... oh. Not their first time out of the starting gate, eh? Jeez, they get started soon in Ponyville! I'd headcanoned a pretty early age for Roseluck's first time but it seems she wasn't alone.
Oh my! She must be feeling a bit sticky then.
Jehoovas Witnesses?
Oh right. Zombified ponies from the nearby ruins. Somepony should really do something about those haunted-as-fuck abandoned towns in the Everfree.
She read Story of the Blanks too, I see. Firesight included that makes each of us three! Ho ho ho...
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Yeah, it's the Juggernaut BITCH! Bow down to a true stripper!
But seriously, this is going to get nasty... I haven't read it yet but ejector seat on standby.
Oooooh! That's a neat twist on the tentacle idea.
Please, FBI, no bully. I think this might be the first foalcon scene I've ripped apart in such a fashion. I won't do it again, Deep State. I swears!
Schneikies!
The power of anime compels you! The power of anime compels you! ... To want it after not wanting it. Hell, I shouldn't complain. It's better than sawing a furry's limbs off. (shudder) I want to hurt you Fur Affinity but I will never be able to hurt you like a single visit to your site hurt me...
Okay, now there is a rape one-liner!
Not bad! Not bad at all. If I had to compare it to other foalcon scenes I've... never read (cough)... This one definitely holds up with sheer atmosphere. It was a bit on the short side, and it wasn't Button and his mother but it gets my seal of approval. Even though I've never read foalcon. Seriously, FBI; I swears! Heheh.... he...
I'm perfectly fine with seeing the CMC getting nailed.
I really enjoyed this chapter the scene at Sugarcube Corner was well done and I'm looking forward to the changes that will happen to the other patrons. The part with Zecora was a nice twist and shows that Eclipse is smart and anticipated ponies going to Zecora and decided to recruit the zebra to stop that. I have no problem with reading what happens between Zecora and the CMC.
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Go Spike! Yeah. So we see how Spike has changed. Awesome. Thanks for the long awaited update. Also, I did not see that coming with Zecora. This is awesome.
This was a fun read :) I hope you keep going with it.
I say go ahead with the CMC.
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I made a stealth edit to the previous chapter that Twilight announces she has an ally to recruit of her own when she sends Rainbow off to convert the weather teams. That ally was Zecora, which you have to admit would be a superb addition to her side. As to how she did it? That remains untold for now, for the very simple reason that I wanted this to be a complete twist; a surprise to the readers as well as the CMC. Will I tell it? Very possibly, especially since every commenter so far as asked for the CMC scenes to be shown.
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That’s one vote...
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That’s two votes...
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Thanks! She didn’t just go for that, but because she knew full well that Zecora’s alchemic abilities and ability to bend the Everfree to her will could be a great asset to her.
And glad to know you have no problem! That’s now three votes in favor...
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Make that four votes to take the express Highway to Hell...
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Not seeing it coming was the point! Thanks. And Spike’s changes--and those of his budding harem--aren’t done yet!
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That’s the plan! Thanks for liking!
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That’s now 5-0 in favor of doing it... so looks like I’m going to be writing it! I’ll be announcing it in a blog I’ll be writing later...
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Apologies for getting to this so late!
And I added some additional stuff since the last time you saw it! Let's see how you like it...
Thanks for sharing the video! I'm going to have find a good use for that song later...
*looks up Darkwood+Stitches* Dear Celestia... yeah, I wouldn't want to encounter that!
Let's toast one of the original great stories of the fandom that still holds up today in spite of its Lavender Unicorn Syndrome that's even worse than me at my peak! The original rule 63 story whose names and canon still echo in fanworks today. Pity the sequel was never finished.
Zecora's about to addict her! And the worst part is, only the first one is free...
I think it's pretty much a question of personal preference of the author there. As you say, they're magically hyperevolved horses so they can have whatever attributes you wish.
Definitely not. I could tell you more, but I don't want to squick you.
Yes, and the constant motion of the wagon wasn't helping! Should probably mention that, actually...
Oh, what I wouldn't give for religious visitor repellent. I get them knocking at my door around two or three times a year here. I don't recall any JWs, but we have gotten Mormons, with their trademark black slacks and tie paired with a white collared shirt.
I don't know... If even Zecora hides from them, what can be done about them?
Yes I did! Just note that even corrupted, basic personality and character attributes remain unchanged. Zecora's still rhyming as well as she ever did.
Even the great JJ draws inspiration from one of the best taglines of the DBZ abridged series! Ah, Molestia, Tumblr just wasn't the same without you...
I'm still waffling over whether she should have wings or not. I've removed them for now. Then the question becomes, what qualities will she impart to these three via sex, since that's how the curse works? Who knows, maybe they'll just gain stripes and start rhyming...
Be ready to punch out at any moment!
Well, it does give new meaning to the term deflowering!
Don't worry. The FBI doesn't care about anything unless you spoke to a guy who spoke to a guy who once left a tip for a Russian waitress at a cafe in Boston. In that case, you're can expect a thirteen-page indictment and breathless coverage on CNN detailing how you're finally the smoking gun in the Russian collusion investigation. AT which point you can hire a sleezy lawyer and make tons of money with the movie rights.
Thank you, Velma... then again, I'm pretty sure you're a dyke anyway!
I left that site years ago for greener pastures, but no matter where you go, there's always a fair amount sewage to wade through to find the good stuff. The only difference is, better filtering functions that prevent atrocities like that from getting through.
*takes a bow* Fun fact--I wasn't planning on this until I wrote it and it just popped out! And then everyone said they wanted to see the scene! I am so going to hell for this...
Oh, don't worry... you might just be seeing Button Mash and mother later! How could neglect one of the most famous incest pairings in the fandom, after all...?
And when the brony goes to heaven
to St. Peter he will tell
Everything I did was for friendship, sir
I'm prepared to roast in hell
Ooh-rah!
Don't Know if you're still staking votes on whether or not to show what follows between the CMC and Zecora on screen or off screen; but I say do it, for the following reasons.
1. As you stated in your author's note: The girls are no stranger to sex, as it's established earlier in the story that they've all been intimate with each other, and with Spike, often in a group setting. So within the context of the story it makes sense that they are fair game for the curse, and it shouldn't blind-side anyone that that is the case.
2. Given the way this magical curse/virus propagates itself, not showing the scene to save the sensibilities of the readers is rather pointless unless you plan to write the CMC out of the story going forward. After-all, those that are partially effected by the curse become increasingly aroused and seek out sex, and once they've fully succumbed they instinctively seek to spread the affliction to as many new partners as possible. Meaning if you were to skip this initial scene you would inevitably have more scenes to skip down the road; as all evidence indicates they would seek out further sexy-times after falling to Zecora.
3. You should ultimately write for yourself, not your audience. I'm personally not a fan of futa, or M/M pairings, but I doubt this would be the story you wanted if you felt constrained to exclude the use of futa, given how prominently it features in the story, and the one that proceeded it (Unleash the Magic: Midnight Rising).
Looking forward to the rest of the scene, as well as the rest of the story; even with elements that are not to preference the plot is still quite entertaining, and the characterizations very well done.