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This was a very interesting chapter and I hope that more chapters will soon follow. Starlight has the problem of being too predictable in her behaviour which isn't surprising for such an orderly pony.
I'm looking forward to see what Dash and Spike's corruption will spread. This is getting good.
Also it was fun to see the realization why Twilight is better than Starlight. When they last faced off the deck was stacked against Twi, and now it is Stacked against Starlight.
To be honest, I was half hoping that Discord and Celestia got infected somehow, but I guess they are off having a non infective kinky time.
Anyway, great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Don't keep us waiting too long. I really could go for seeing how Spike, or Dash is doing (those I am interested in the most). The others will still be good to follow as well.
Hoooboy...I'm looking forward to what's coming up with Dash and Blossomforth there.
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That's a good point. Her main problem is that she's too controlling, even now, and overestimates her own abilities, believing every problem can be solved with magic. That makes her very predictable from Twiilght's point of view, but that's not to say Twilight's isn't overlooking a few things--or ponies--herself.
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Thanks! You'll be seeing in the very next chapter.
Indeed. Not just that, though. Starlight proceeds from two sorely mistaken assumptions, which she'll learn in due course. Then again, Eclipse can miscalculate too...
No, they're just pervs to begin with, sorry. Discord might be able to snap his fingers and fix the curse, but the greater danger is whether it would infect him before he could. And if the curse got hold of Celly... You can bet Eclipse is already making plans to hold off/convert them to her side, but for now, she can't let word get out of what's happening in Ponyville until she's ready.
I appreciate the interest! Stay tuned for a blog post in the next couple days explaining next steps in the story.
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Thanks! But it's not just them, it's everything that comes after them... there's an entire weather team to corrupt, after all!
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I agree that would be scary. If Eclipse could infect Celestia into Molestia.
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PS: I like your new avatar! Crossing Athena Cykes with Sunset Shimmer is something I'd never thought of but works well.
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Thanks!
Trixie’s going to be the one to save the day…er, night?…isn’t she?
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On another note, everytime Flutterbat and or Timberjack comes up—even before reading this story—I can only imagine a scene, or picture, maybe, of Flutters pouting about how, “It’s not fair that she gets to be the tree.”
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She'll play a role, yes.
Fixed.
Heh. Not bad. Maybe I'll try to find a way to fit that in later.