Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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A quieter chapter than I assumed it would be, especially after some of the recent developments. The threat on Gallus in the hive about Ocellus made me giggle as I'm pretty sure those two are destined for something verry different to what Thorax thinks.
Diamond Tira... where are you going with this filly? ...I do wonder.
I find it funny that AJ is getting in on some rather more dangerous things than rarity would likely allow if she knew. Although the scene did feel shockingly safe considering they were fighting a big dangerous monster with even more dangerous things inside.
Given that she is currently able to partake in the action, I wonder how may months she will be allowed to keep this up before Rarity again tries to bar her. Because with her prowess AJ sure can be useful when brute force is needed.
The Pie sisters invading the Yaks was funny. I do wonder why they didn't just walk in the front door and announce its a diplomatic mission. Although I think Limestone is enjoying making it less diplomatic and more aggressive.
The shower scene was fun but shorter than I expected. I had a good laugh at how you described Dash's pole. Poor Fluttershy been hosed... so, after a body swap (that I have ideas on the hows but not when) that means that Dashie will likely be the one to carry their foal. And she aint gonna like that mid war if it goes on for a long time. This whole body swap thing is gonna continue to be weird...
All up, it had a good emotional payoff at the end as they cuddled under the water.