Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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Pinkie supporting Twilight finding other sexual partners too was an immense put off
Yea, ok you made me laugh there. Cause everypony seems to know that RD and Fluttershy aren't yet up to the part where they bang.
The AJ part was nice as was RDs little moment there too.
Oh and the best part of the chapter for me, Sunburst. I hope he rushes out the door and smacks into his crush that would que highly awkward moment.
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Sorry about that. I was really hesitant to have this chapter have that in it but I kept finding that's Pinkie's character flaw. She's almost too supportive, wants to please everyone, and needs Twilight. Twilight almost dies in Ironhoof? Major depressive episode and proclivity towards dissociation and violence. Moondancer confesses feelings for Twilight, she's "okay with it." I mean in canon she has that whole Party of One moment cause she thinks her friends aren't her friends anymore. Comedy helps hide pain. Then there's the stereotype of the funniest and most helpful people being the most depressed. I really haven't written much of Pinkie without her being close to or interacting near Twilight. That's a problem in a relationship. For reference, I started the chapter when I finished the last one. And I had the first scene (which technically is like a third of the chapter) finished only a few days ago because I was conflicted about how the story would progress for Twilight and Pinkie for quite a while. Cause Pinkie's not going to handle the stuff that happened in Starlight's village well for quite some time- and her need to please isn't helping.
And I liked writing Sunburst and the rest, those were fun. Seems like as the story goes on, I have more and more stories that will converge but everything is important for the end.
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Haha, oops. Good catch. Yeah Tank is a tortoise. But even the show itself has issues keeping that straight sometimes.