Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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Alrighty, here we go with another explosive chapter. Finally got to read it and it was a fittingly gripping chapter what with all going on. It was also a very busy chapter so I'm glad it wasn't made any longer as there's a lot of ducks to try and keep in a row here.
I did not expect Luna to get shot off a cloud while confessing to Twilight. That looked rather rough. And assuming that Alicorns can in fact die given the right conditions then I'm also assuming that Luna's not in a good place right now. Considering what happened, that scene as a whole was well handled. Funny that Luna's also gone asking Cadence (who of course would have known full well about Twi's situation with Pinkie).
Seems that Fluttershy and Dash are coming back to a less peaceful Ponyville than they left it. That's going to go well... And I can see it extending their time as males too. ...As if voicing Fluttershy as Dash and vice versa wasn't crazy enough
The Pies are interesting, I want to see more there as Cheese's entrance looks like it's going to incur a serious conversation or two with dad before he even gets to Pinkie Pie.
Found a weee mistake:
there is a random r there. Found near the end of the rather brutal farm scene. Oh boy, AJ and family will not be happy when they get back and find their farm house is partially destroyed and has a dead psycho in it. Kinda makes me feel sorry for Diamond. Diamond Dog is tanky. Thankfully. Or DT would probably be a casualty right about now.
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Fixed. Must have been an accidental leftover when I was trying to fix that section since that Diamond Tiara part, along with Twilight and Luna's section, went through a lot of rewrites. From characters not dying to them dying. Alicorns can technically die in this story. Though it takes a lot and the arrows are more for containment than death. Hard to kill something that is inherently tied to an aspect of the world. Harder if the thing they are tied to is an idea. Luna's going to be shaken up and messed up. Not dead. Think how she looked after she was freed of Nightmare's influence in episode one. That to me is a low powered alicorn.
Partially that's why I ended the chapter there. Cliffhanger mixed with like four big stopping points.
Might still not be a fun series of chapters for DT since I'm still on the trajectory I've been planning since having her get hurt. Character development, yes. Fun time, no.
Next chapter feels like another big one for the story since I'm trying to tie up this section.