Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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This was an enjoyable read. I like the continuing developments and hope for more soon.
Interesting use of referencing new events in canon while also keeping the main story going. Your selection of minor cast here makes me wonder if they are going to become something more soon too.
Celestia and discord mention was cool. I hope to have him pop by and give cele a kiss with her small group in attendance. That would make probably make both fluttershy and dash flip out a bit.
Oh and more Flutterdash soon? It was nice hearing that they spooned and were cute doing so, but more?
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Fluttershy and Dash are still into their "the other pony is in my body so that's awkward and kind of icky" feeling so the cute stuff is a bit awkward still but it's something I like writing so yes that's going to continue. And I tried to reference canon events and magic artifacts and trying to get some reason why they pop up and completely disappear for a while. I'm attempting to make the show make some sense. And yeah I at least attempt to provide some continual character development for the characters I use. Maybe it's a small thing each time but development is good. Ironically I'm more worried of taking the character development too fast. Story time is about a week total as of chapter eight. Then I realize how much I've written and relax a little bit. But yeah I go with the idea that every character, even the small ones, should be important. But yeah the characters I added will be important for a while. Did I expect to reference both Starlight and the movie itself so soon? Not exactly but looking ahead it makes sense and I keep coming up with fun stuff so that's not going to change. I have no idea how long this arc might be. I'll figure out the journey as I go along. I know where I'm going and the main points but the stuff in between is only partially known.